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The Ancient Druid

The Druid lived far from people in a simple cave once or twice a year he came down to sell his potions trinkets and bits and bops said to cure all ills. He would sit with others friends and rascals yet drink one and all under the table and with majestic gait walk away a brave few decided to follow him yet fell by the way side unable to keep up until the path started gentle out a bit. Only one person had been able to keep him in eyesight and now too he had lost Volmer he just seemed to vanish One minute there, the next gone like a puff of smoke Balgar searched high and low for Volmer finding not a trace He was here he thought right here so where could he be? He closed his eyes and stuck out his hands he could feel air moving in front of him and followed it suddenly everything went quiet he slowly opened his eyes and found himself in a vast low cavern with a beam of light in the distance he went towards it, when Volmer spoke he jumped and peered at the Ancient druid who said you have passed the 1st test but the way is long and can be very hard Now get some rest you are bound to need it. Day 2 dawned Balgar sleepily stirred as he felt a poke from Volmer's staff Now you need to learn the druid way if you wish to follow me I near the end of life while you are at the start two roads ahead of you one wrong the other right Sit, close your eyes and be guided by your senses. So Balgar sat letting loose his senses gradually the paths appeared he went towards them and stood in front waiting for a sign. When a gentle nudge came he followed it and the path shone with golden light well done now you must collect a silk feather and a piece of blue shell Balgar followed the path and came across a young bird being attacked by a demon he chased it away and tended to the birds wounds the bird gave him a silk feather and pointed out an abounded nest where he found the needed shell. He took them to Volmer who said well done I see you are to be my student I still have much to teach you and my time here is short. Each day Volmer taught something new to Balgar which he used as a druid, alas as he taught him he himself weakened until he could no longer stand. Balgar carried him to the hot springs so he could cleanse himself then dress in his ceremonial robes with a great cry Volmer struck the rock and disappeared into the dark his purpose here done and and the reins passed on to Balgar

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Date: 1/28/2024 8:22:00 AM
The ending is really deeply moving. You really an excellent storyteller: lovee this dear shadow.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/28/2024 11:26:00 AM
I am glad you are pleased with how it turned out hugs Shadow
Date: 1/27/2024 10:03:00 PM
Love it. A FAV for my list, Shadow. A well told story, very engaging and a page turner as they say. Reminds me of when I used to play Ages of Camelot on my computer. You must tell us more ... please. :-) Have a pleasant day, my friend. Bill
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Bill Baker
Date: 1/29/2024 5:35:00 PM
It's ancient in today's world, back in 2004. LOL The same time as first Star Wars multi player game. Remember, I'm old, 79 in two weeks. :-)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/28/2024 11:23:00 AM
ty Bill I will try to in time so hang on I dont know the game but it sounds interesting hugs Shadow
Date: 1/27/2024 3:28:00 PM
outstanding storytelling skills, dear Shadow. I love stories of metamorphosis. I enjoyed the mystery of this timeless adventure...well done, Shadow. Sending you an e-hug for your pain, Sara
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/28/2024 11:18:00 AM
hi and ty Sara you are very kind it was great fun to write my friend and house companion is a real Druid and a high priest He goes to a lot of the ceremonies an is such wise man so I sometimes pick his brain hugs Shadow
Date: 1/27/2024 12:21:00 PM
As he embarks on a quest to learn the knowledge of the old Druid Volmer, Balgar undergoes a metamorphosis and becomes the hero of the story. Impressive narrative, my friend. Hope you doing well.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/27/2024 12:46:00 PM
well as I can expect Sotto pain is worse even with the morphine yes he had to learn fast but Volmer taught him well hugs Shadow
Date: 1/27/2024 6:37:00 AM
"The Druid's Journey" unfolds like a mystical odyssey, weaving together elements of adventure, introspection, and the timeless quest for knowledge. The narrative follows Balgar's transformative journey as he seeks to unravel the secrets of the ancient Druid, Volmer, and ultimately assumes the mantle of wisdom himself. Great storytelling my friend...
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/27/2024 7:03:00 AM
I was drawn to write this SO I dreamt of it for a few days nights before I just had to put pen to paper hugs Shadow
Date: 1/26/2024 8:47:00 PM
I loved this, how you’ve written about this druid in an engaging manner. I especially love the line “ once or twice a year he came down to sell his potions trinkets and bits and bops said to cure all ills.“ love this! I cant wait for the next. Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/27/2024 6:55:00 AM
Hi Ink well its finished finally lol maybe one day Balgar might continue the tale whatever Volmer will go on in poetical minds hugs Shadow

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