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The Ambiance

In chilly sensation held Wrapped within warm quilt I could almost feel my balmy Breath condense through the Air With the odor of my favorite Scents swarming through my Hair I sit with passion, my divan positioned My posture upright, my thoughts Engaged My room lit just right My table perfectly placed I focus, I think I stare Glasses on, books on the Right pages… pens, pencils, Some papers to solve upon Then tear…

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Sue Mason

Date: 1/30/2010 10:11:00 AM

Congratulations Farah once again. I've been commenting on this since last May and its been a winner all along ... smile ... know you're probably busy with school but I hope you come back soon with more great writing!! Love ya ....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/29/2010 1:20:00 AM

You certainly set the stage when you write, Farah, and I'm glad you received recognitiion in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2010 7:34:00 AM

GREAt writing on YOUR writing, and a big Congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/27/2010 9:02:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this, Farah--I wish you also the best in the PS contest :)

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/27/2010 6:37:00 PM

Very interesting write, Farah! Great win and congratulations to you! Glad you are here gotta go back and read some of your poems. been a while!-Robert

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/29/2009 11:51:00 AM

Farah, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

Date: 9/25/2009 2:02:00 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

Elaine George

Date: 9/25/2009 3:44:00 AM

Beautiful! dear Farah. Best wishes through to the next round. Love Lainie

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 9/24/2009 6:44:00 PM

Hi Farah Congratulations on making the first round on the finals contest! Love Laura :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2009 10:10:00 AM

Young One Farah, congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 9/24/2009 9:11:00 AM

Well done, Farah best wishes in the next rounds.Rgds Brian

Sue Mason

Date: 6/27/2009 10:58:00 AM

Great to see your writing featured, farah !! I loved this back in May and here it appears this week! Wonderful title inviting us in and a well-deserved selection to be featured. Congratulations!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/25/2009 10:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week Farah. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/25/2009 9:29:00 AM

Congratulations Young One, on the featuring of "Ambiance." Store away, don't tear. Vince

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 6/23/2009 1:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week. Enjoy the honor. Ernilando

Date: 6/22/2009 4:27:00 PM

Interesting perspective in this poem. I really like the last stanza. Congratulations on being featured this week. Keep on writing! I wish you continued success. Karen

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 6/22/2009 2:17:00 PM

Congrats on your feature poem this week

Michael Jordan

Date: 6/22/2009 7:15:00 AM

Farah your poetry is always something to admire - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ

Brian Strand

Date: 6/21/2009 11:47:00 PM

Congrats on your feature poem this week Farah.Rgds Brian

John Rhinem

Date: 6/5/2009 12:46:00 AM

Smile~I just came back to read this again, and to say hello to "You Farah Chamma"~I always think about where "You" are, and what life may be like for "You!?"~I 'Always' hope that it is happy? I 'Always' hope that for "You," from the most sincerest and deepest of my heart & soul!! Smile, I hope "You" are well~"My Love Always & Forever To You & Yours, John!!!":):) Bye ~

Date: 6/2/2009 1:50:00 PM

Interesting use of imagery in this creative view. The last stanza surprised me. Good Job! Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen

June Rouhana

Date: 5/27/2009 12:29:00 AM

That's one great poem Farah.. Keep up the excellent work ;)

Sue Mason

Date: 5/25/2009 10:54:00 PM

Beautiful writing inviting us into your world and reflecting your title with the skill of a master, farah. I've been away for awhile with more than just a tear ... more like gut wrenching sobs for my dog now gone to the dog angels ... sad. Imagine you are busy with studies but I am so glad you still post here at the Soup. Much love ...

Sammy Shaq

Date: 5/25/2009 8:06:00 AM

A week of hell huh. It will be over, I am confident that you shall succeed in this life with your passion and strength. Love, Sami.

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 5/20/2009 7:58:00 AM

well, great piece. we've just got to engage ourselves in something worthwhile. Farah, I, missed you and your comment. I have been busy with my studies and other extra curricular activities. I realy missed the family life we lived on soupland. I wish I would get back fully soon. I am onb break..... Please read this poems of mine. MY FARAH-WAY FRIEND, and THY CHAINS OH FARAH...They are dedicated to you. hope to hear from you soonest. 'Leke