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The Amazing Sun

Amazing Sun The scholars of Scripture tell us that the moon and the stars came to be rulers of the night Like you, they were placed far away with beauty and strength; but unlike you, not near as bright O what misery and pain there must have been before you came to be the governor of the day! It is written of you, and I believe it’s true, that you came by command on the fourth day I never cease to be charmed by the warm touch of your rising out of the Eastern sky And I am often awed and speechless, as I behold your gentle setting in the Western sky Cj08042015 (contest:The Answer)

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Date: 8/19/2015 8:58:00 PM
this is really nice, it truly is amazing!
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 8/19/2015 11:13:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I appreciate your compliment.
Date: 8/17/2015 11:18:00 PM
Curtis. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT
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Date: 8/19/2015 11:15:00 PM
Hi Skat A. It was challenging. Thank you for your encouragement. Curtis.
Date: 8/4/2015 2:24:00 PM
Curtis, I like your creative and beautifully penned prose. well done and thanks for visiting my poem, beyond
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Date: 8/4/2015 7:52:00 PM
Broken Wings. Thanks for you kind words. Curtis.

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