The Amazing Spider

In the early morning view outside my window
Captured my attention to one spider spinning his web
Interesting to look at how he maneuvers and views
The radius of his web for any prey to step inside

Not an apprentice anymore, inborn a master weaver
A lone performer living and feeding on his own
When the surrounding is dim, someone at stake--the leaver
Lurks a cunning spider on his bounded zone

Once marked his territory, guarded it with all his might
A truly wonder crystal piece hanging undisturbed
Withstand the slashing wind and consenting to a water right
For heedless occupants serving as their deathbed

Strumming threads to serenade his lady
His nonpareil prowess in dancing adds more to his intent
Fearsome to other contenders, he's dealing a real shady
To follow the dragline with or without her consent
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 6/29/2013 10:18:00 PM
Excellent Noel, love the wonderful imagery here, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/20/2013 12:09:00 AM
Congratulations and thank you for entering my competition,
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Date: 6/5/2013 7:26:00 PM
sana The Amazing Spiderman nlg
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