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The howling of the lone gray wolf His fingerprint sound waves Reaches out to his alpha female And to enemies like staves His hunt unfruitful this night No ungulates found alive Few scavenged tidbit pieces Barely enough to survive His alpha mate heavy with pups tucked into the warm den Hunger gnawed away at her, weak~ dreams of a fat tough hen Maybe fate would befriend her mate At least a deer he'll kill And bring home a lean hind quarter An empty stomach fill Sixty days or so the liter carried Must be many large pups Maybe four or even seven Seven pups a deluxe They'll be delivered just in time For the deer, elk and moose To give birth to their fawns~ easy prey Food source hidden in the spruce Hunger will recede through the summer They'll be plenty of game Maybe at least one pup will survive To the future lay claim Contest: Canis Lupus The Wolf Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Written: April 06, 2015

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Date: 4/18/2015 5:41:00 PM
Sara, A mighty interesting topic and win. Congrats!! Luv LINDA
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Date: 4/16/2015 10:20:00 AM
Hi Sara, This was very picturesque and rhythmic. Nice language touches to define a wild family in raw nature. Congratulations on a fine win. Earl
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Date: 4/16/2015 12:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Sara. An interesting and relevant testimony. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 4/14/2015 5:00:00 PM
Congratulations !! on your wonderful win a 7. Blessings Eve
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Date: 4/14/2015 12:45:00 AM
ohh, such a potent write, sara... happy congrats to you!
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Date: 4/13/2015 7:00:00 AM
You portrayed their struggle for survival so well - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/12/2015 8:35:00 AM
Congrats on your win Sara. Love the image in this one.
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Date: 4/12/2015 8:10:00 AM
Hi Sara, stopping back to congratulate you for your nice win on your lovely poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/8/2015 1:26:00 AM
Wonderful poem...too many times, we take other species for granted. So many wolves have gone extinct and so many are closer to extinction, than they should be. Wolves are necessary, but too many people don't realize their pourpose. Thanks for a great read.
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Date: 4/7/2015 6:27:00 PM
you did a very interesting one on wolves for the contest. I think it's quite good, Sara. Also thanks for the little card you sent me. That was so thoughtful of you!
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Date: 4/7/2015 6:27:00 PM
can you soupmail me your address for future reference. It was not quite clear enough for me on the return address part.
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Date: 4/6/2015 10:43:00 PM
Love this great write my friend. The wolf was sacred to my grandfather's people. This write was right on Q from start to finish. Smooth flow, enjoyable verses. A7 and best of luck in that contest with it. Its already a winner in my book!
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Date: 4/6/2015 7:15:00 PM
G'day Sara... enjoyed your poem with wisdom on the life of wolves. Many forget that they are an essential part of nature's structure. Thank you Sara - Lindsay
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Date: 4/6/2015 4:35:00 PM
Hi Sara, such a great poem for contest! Very good facts in your nicely rhymed poem. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/6/2015 2:31:00 PM
Sara, wonderful entry for the contest, yes they do have to struggle to survive, 7, and thanks for visiting my poetry
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Date: 4/6/2015 1:29:00 PM
Sarah, Very nice write on the life or Canis Lupis the have a hard lot. Hope this does well in the contest! ~Jan
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