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The Albino(Haiku)

A horse of pure white, Wild as a November storm, Running with the wind.

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Heidie Buys

Date: 10/8/2008 4:04:00 PM

Congratulations on having this beautiful poem featured this week. Well done. Regards Heidie

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/6/2008 10:17:00 AM

Patricia, this is simply brilliant! Congratulations on your well deserved featured write. Love, Shar

Sue Mason

Date: 10/6/2008 8:55:00 AM

Astounding picture you've drawn with three lines. I keep seeing Trigger rearing up with the Lone Ranger on his back and then my crazy mind flashes to a riderless beauty coming out of the ether of snow ... LOL ... can you see what fun you've brought, Patricia!! Thanks so much for this well-deserved selection featured this week. Congratulations!

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/6/2008 8:19:00 AM

Superb perfect , Haiku , Patricia ... Well worth the front page ...

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 10/6/2008 7:14:00 AM

Paints a pretty picture. Congratulations Patricia on Your Haiku "The Albino" being featured. Vince

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/6/2008 3:14:00 AM

Patricia - Sounds like a beautiful scene - congrats on being featured and God Bless

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/5/2008 6:00:00 PM

Makes a creative vision in one's mind. Congratulations on being featured! ~ Carrie

Date: 10/5/2008 5:17:00 PM

What a creative use of this short form. I like the active nature of this poem. Congratulations on having your haiku featured. Keep on writing! Karen