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The Actual Dependant

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The Actual Dependant

Waking up in the morning with you near me,
Making your favourite toast and your black tea,
Hugging me I hear your words  "Good morning  my love",
With a sweet kiss , I say "I want more now".

Holding your hands and helping you walk,
I love to hear, your cute and lovely talks.
Combing you long snowy hair,
Washing your face ,making you more fair.

Feeding you food with my own hands,
Taking you for a walk into dreamland,
I completed you in everyway,
Why then did you leave me and go away?

What should I do alone in the old age?
In front of your photo , stand and gaze?
You felt you freed me of your burden..
No Darling, not you, it was me,on you who was dependant.

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  1. Date: 1/10/2010 4:53:00 PM
    Awesome piece, Rima! I love the last two lines! So touching! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 1:13:00 AM
    Lovely use of imagery Rima! Please keep on posting sire! Jeremia

  1. Date: 5/14/2009 10:00:00 PM
    Lovely poem, Rima. What beautiful and emotive images you present here, in this great work. Very well done, my friend! Ruben.