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The Ocean of the Child Mind

THE OCEAN OF THE CHILD MIND Mirage of shimmering hot air Between the bus stop And the newsagent's shop Above the tarred road there. Saltwell Park lake shipped Me out on voyages of mind-ocean; With swans moving to lake motion, Not knowing their feathers were clipped. With imagined snow-deep slopes, Clouds immense rose like mountains, Life’s uncertain curtains, Above the factories for steel, tyres, and ropes. .................................................................................................. Note ....Saltwell Park was for long the only park in Gateshead, England.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/30/2013 6:06:00 PM
This is very well penned! Great work!
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Date: 6/30/2013 12:01:00 PM
Really liked it. A visual memory brought to life in your poem.
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Date: 6/30/2013 9:39:00 AM
You have inspired me to look this up.....I feel I can see it through your eyes. :)
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