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The Gift

The hour was late,the night was cold, The sky was clear and bright. The moon sent down it's silver glow, As they plodded through the night. They stopped beside the old inn door, That they might find rest and shelter; But the answer here they'd heard before, "There's no room left, I fear Sir." And so it was to a stable they came, Where the hay smelled sweet and mild. A lowly place, the young man thought, To bring one's wife with child. But here it was that He was born, The Lord of All Creation. In a lowly place at the back of town, The Gift of God, Salvation. Judy Ball MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYBODY

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/22/2023 4:31:00 PM
Such a sweet little tale of a simple journey that turned the world around Judy. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 12/22/2023 1:46:00 PM
This would probably have been higher placed but you had your name on the bottom. It's probably hard for people to remember to remove info from the bottom of their poems when using old ones. This is a lovely message, judy. Congrats.
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Date: 12/22/2011 6:35:00 AM
Happy Christmas day to you and Happy New year 2012. Thanks for this and for your sweet comment on my write. bl
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Judy Ball
Date: 12/22/2011 7:46:00 AM
Thannks so much my friend. God Bless and Merry Christmas, JB
Date: 12/21/2011 4:12:00 PM
A true reason for Christmas and so beautifully told Judy, Hope yours is wonderful! :)
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Judy Ball
Date: 12/22/2011 2:39:00 AM
Thanks so much Liz. Glad you like it. God Bless and Merry Christmas, JB
Date: 12/21/2011 11:17:00 AM
Judy, I really love this write, you have created You such perfect poem! You painted a wonderful image for everyone to see!! I really liked the last stanza...what a great message you gave to us!! Awesome Work!!
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Judy Ball
Date: 12/22/2011 2:54:00 AM
Thanks so much Russ. Glad you liked it so much. This is one of my personal faves. God Bless and Merry Christmas, JB :)
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Russell Sivey
Date: 12/21/2011 11:20:00 AM
"...you have created...You've written such a perfect poem!... Typos, sorry.
Date: 12/21/2011 7:49:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Judy. Wishing you a New Year filled with inspiration and the best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol MERRY CHRISTMAS JUDY
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Judy Ball
Date: 12/22/2011 3:32:00 AM
Thanks so much Carol. Glad you liked it. May the Good Lord Bless and keep you and yours now and throughout the coming year. JB
Date: 12/20/2011 10:49:00 PM
Beautifully written.
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Judy Ball
Date: 12/22/2011 3:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Carol. Glad you liked it. God Bless and Merry Christmas, JB

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