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That's Why I Love

Marked by love, heated by passion, Lips in a tongue-tangled web, I surrender the fight, my love-light bright, With much delight, I'll take that bite ... Lost and ecstatic, the peak grows near, Here comes the sweetest part, Taste buds flow, my love-light glow, Temptations grow, the oats I sow ... Succor the scars, while stains reflect, Back to the tree of life, Lush wine we pour, my love-light s'more, Down to my core, I want you more ... Marked by love, heated by passion, Lips in a tongue-tangled web ... That's why I love .... ......................................................... Contest Name: If it hurts so bad, why do we do it? Sponsor: Silent One Placement: 4th Place

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/3/2016 2:30:00 PM

An impressive write that moved and stilled me at the same time. Topic jump - I'm a noticer and just laughed out loud thinking of my name should we marry! Laugh along ... CayCay

Jesse Day
Date: 8/5/2016 5:27:00 AM

CayCay Day - sounds like a great country music name! Funny;)

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 6/10/2016 8:46:00 AM

Very well penned Jesse!

Jesse Day
Date: 6/10/2016 8:54:00 AM

Thank you! Happy you enjoyed it - Jesse

Lewis Raynes

Date: 6/7/2016 4:57:00 AM

I love the passion in ur words, ur poetic words. A great write. Ur poetic friend lewis

Jesse Day
Date: 6/7/2016 5:12:00 AM

Thanks - just checking to see if I submitted incorrectly for your contest. No worries, bet I can submit it in another. Thanks for your comments. - Jesse

Lewis Raynes
Date: 6/7/2016 4:58:00 AM

I'm sorry this was missed by me when going thru.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2016 12:51:00 PM

I LOVE your take on the theme good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Jesse Day
Date: 6/6/2016 5:55:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words - it means a lot to me - Jesse