Get Your Premium Membership

That's Me

It falls from my hands and scatters all around one by one I pick up each piece my life comes together in this poem Joys and laughter everywhere but a little sorrow hides under the chair dreams and hopes desperately hang on the wind threatens to blow them away Fragments of my memories lie here and there a few unforgotten college days some precious words dad had said angry face of a long lost friend Strewn all over are words well intended but misunderstood words written for a poem, left halfway some earnest attempts, some fake If I were to measure these pieces Would there be more joy or despair I really cannot say But they make me what I am today. Afroze Ali Date:24th june 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/25/2013 11:37:00 PM
Loving this one again. BIG congrats . It was one of my favorites.
Login to Reply
Ali Avatar
Afroze Ali
Date: 12/26/2013 9:23:00 AM
Thanks Andrea :)
Date: 12/24/2013 12:21:00 AM
Enjoyed your beautiful write on a portrait of a poet and congratulations on the win, Afroze
Login to Reply
Ali Avatar
Afroze Ali
Date: 12/26/2013 9:23:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram!
Date: 12/23/2013 1:19:00 PM
Congrats Afroze on your superb win in this contest. This is seemingly simplistic but I found it so endearing and very beautiful... love, G
Login to Reply
Ali Avatar
Afroze Ali
Date: 12/23/2013 8:07:00 PM
Thanks Gautami:)
Date: 6/27/2011 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "All The Little Pieces" contest Afroze. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/26/2011 12:29:00 AM
Many congrats on your super win, Afroze with this honest rendering of who you are. Lainie
Login to Reply
Date: 6/25/2011 5:31:00 AM
Afroze this is beautiful. The images you've painted are lovely. Many congrats for this win.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2011 10:47:00 PM
a greeat poem from you … perky cheers for the amazing award, afroze!! :) huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2011 8:38:00 PM
I really like how you did your entry, afroze. You covered a lot of ground with just a few lines. REally great job. I enjoyed reading this one alot. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2011 6:12:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Afroze
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2011 3:54:00 PM
Very nice piece of Poetry and a great win for you.....Michael
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2011 3:30:00 PM
Congrats Afroze on another excellent win in this contest with this beautiful creative poetry luv.. enjoy .. poetic art..luv..
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs