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That White Building

We left New York City moving to a Mid West town Where the sky was a pretty blue and a land of greening gown Buildings painted white stood out against the scene But a sensing of the untouched made my mind internally scream I always got this feeling as we walked their streets of old What could I be not be seeing, what have we not been told When we stopped to say hello we felt that we were all alone It's not what we seen in the brochure when we decided to move our home As the weeks and months progressed our daughter became very withdrawn Which is very out of character for she's normally as fresh as the dawn Then the day arrived that would change our lives forever She never came home the previous night, the worry of parental sever As we awoke the following morning it appeared so different from other days The skies were a strange shade of red no voices from children's play No sounds of life could be heard, no insects or birds on the wing When normally it's as vibrant as life, buzzing whilst others sing We set off to look for our daughter shouting her name as we go Walking through empty streets as our minds drift in worried grow We hear some strange kind of chanting, it's from that white building ahead Whilst above us the skies turn a redded grey, I feel a sensing dread We reach this building of white past the river turned red by the sky Peering through the window I'm now in parental cry For standing by the alter is my daughter in demonic stare Around her are hoards of locusts, whilst down her body a snake she wears Strange chanting's resonate with echo as the congregation screams in wild display What events are unfolding in front of us it should be a normal summers day As they turn and look towards the window so many eyes stare through the pane We become suffocated by their hoards, it appears the locusts reign Somehow we escaped this horror from that white building beside the river Every time I look into my thoughts it's leaves me in a cold cold shiver The same brochure appeared for years alluring families to this Mid West town Who would move where no children play, in it's silence you could easily drown http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/dark-8.php Written 11/13/2010 5:50:00 PM

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Date: 6/11/2015 4:17:00 PM
JAMES, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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James Fraser
Date: 6/13/2015 11:46:00 AM
Thank you SKAT, I need to get back to my story poems, smiles, James xx
Date: 6/11/2015 8:49:00 AM
Creepy and mesmerizing. Congratulations!
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James Fraser
Date: 6/13/2015 11:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard, James :)
Date: 6/11/2015 5:27:00 AM
a chilling write James congrats on placing hugs
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James Fraser
Date: 6/13/2015 11:36:00 AM
Thank you kindly Shadow for honoring my poem, very much appreciated, James xx
Date: 11/18/2010 8:21:00 AM
Awesome imagination, and this new mythology discovered out of self, what can this white building be? I love every inch of the imagery here ... and there scene, the American landscape. Wow!
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Date: 11/15/2010 6:36:00 PM
You have me shivering James. Great poem. Wouldn't want to live in that town!
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Date: 11/15/2010 3:50:00 PM
Wild imagination that is very scary.You probably could write a scary thriller for Halloween...Thanks for stopping by and reading my Limerick "Twins In Name Only"...Sara
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Date: 11/15/2010 2:02:00 PM
creepy stuff... don't like the demonic stuff.
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Date: 11/14/2010 1:54:00 PM
Your work here emulates the tales of Stephen King, James. I'm thinking the daughter became involved with some sort of cult. What a horror for a parent to see this! Riveting poetry. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/14/2010 12:21:00 PM
This is just whack! Not a good time to read this piece James.. Almost bed time for me.. You do variety so well it's scary like this piece.. Enjoyed ;)
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Date: 11/14/2010 5:27:00 AM
I agree that was a cool write...I 2nd your the Stephen King of Poetry....well done my friend
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Date: 11/13/2010 6:17:00 PM
that was a spooky tale, sent shivers up my back, you're the Stephen King of poetry
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