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(Although not initially written for Ink Empress contest, I believe it fits nicely)

In this evocative sestina, a daughter (Gen Z) of the digital age addresses her father (Baby Boomer), highlighting the stark contrast between their work philosophies. The poem opens the generational divide, exploring the father's value placed on stability and long-term loyalty versus the daughter's desires for freedom and a career fueled by passion. The poem creates the scene of her world - and the boundless potential of the freelance life, contrasting it with the father's experience of a more traditional, structured work environment.

Side Note: My youngest daughter, a Gen Z, and I, the boomer, have some of the most interesting conversations, always in love and respect. I have learned a lot from her, as I do manage many of this generation.

- Blessings,
Daniel Henry Rodgers

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Your paradigm's a relic, a plea from data's cemetery, While I sculpt luminaries on screens, a sable sea. "Company loyalty," a myth, spun in your reverie, But AI forges kingdoms, in ephemeral memory. Survival's a mosaic, the gig life sets us free, No cubicles confine us, from drudgery's apathy. You bartered years for baubles, in tenure's fallacy, Oblivious to the fractures in stability's gallery. We're digital artisans, crafting with autonomy, Passion's our lodestar, in dreams we find our spree, Not gears in a relentless, bureaucratic machinery. The epoch you cherished, now a software jubilee. The hustle's in our essence, innovation's our decree, Toppling old monopolies, erasing corporate apathy. We dismantle dated norms, the old guard's fallacy, Erecting spires of purpose, evanescent yet free, Our fealty's to progress, to visions that ignite and decree, Not to a firm's legacy, in stone for eternity. You mock "influencer," a term in your scoffery, Yet a viral post can shift markets, with acuity, And dethrone giants with a digital apostrophe. The nine-to-five's an antique, a fossil choreography, We're the narrators, the seers of modernity, Forging bonds, a renaissance, not a hierarchy. The safety net you sought? A frayed and fading legacy, A comfort you clung to, amidst life's capricious spree. We hedge our bets, diversify, with boundless glee, Designing nets of prowess, a fiery apostrophe To constraints, pursuing futures that long to be, Not a pension's promise, a symbol of quiet despondency. So shed the dated suit, the archaic fallacy, The world you knew, Dad, is a VHS tape, a memory. In your eyes, I see the pride, despite our disparity, For in this dance of time, we share a rare clarity: Though our paths diverge, our hearts beat in synchrony, Your legacy lives on, in my world of modernity. That was then, this is now, the future's our decree, We, Gen Z, the coders, shaping worlds to be free. Your world is fading, Dad, a relic, an ancient memory.

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Date: 4/30/2024 6:12:00 PM
Daniel, I never thought your daughter would be as depicted in the poem. With a dad such as yourself, she has to be a wonderful person!
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Date: 4/30/2024 11:57:00 AM
Daniel, we do learn a lot from our kids. I know mine have kept me in contact with a lot of the latest technology. I detected a bit of arrogance in the tone from your daughter in this poem. Much of the work they do in coding will be done by AI in the future and the nature of jobs will change in ways that will astound even those from Gen Z. Here's an example....the full self driving software Tesla uses was recently completely rewritten by AI. No one can change it or even understand it...the engineers just tell the AI who they would like it to drive like and it writes the code. They upload positive scenarios from actual cars that owners drive, and the AI writes the code to reproduce that style of driving. No more army of programmers. My son has one of these cars and the self driving has gotten much better since this change in software development occurred.
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Date: 4/30/2024 4:33:00 PM
Dear Duke, your insights into the evolving landscape of technology and its impact on future generations are truly eye-opening. It's fascinating how AI is reshaping industries, including software development. Your example with Tesla's self-driving software illustrates the immense potential and challenges ahead. Indeed, our children are guiding us into a future where adaptability and innovation are paramount. By the way my daughter is much more kinder and understanding than the character in my poe. :) I am so glad you are back! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 4/29/2024 12:37:00 PM
Daniel, great poem - gives a lot to think about. I like the theme of a conversation between a boomer and a gen Z. My son might be a millennial, but I can still relate. I'm glad to hear the positive note, "Though our paths diverge, our hearts beat in synchrony"
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Date: 4/29/2024 3:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, David; your words mean a lot to me. I'm glad you found resonance in the intergenerational conversation theme. Your ability to relate despite generational differences is heartening. Thank you for appreciating the positive note; indeed, unity in diversity is vital. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
Date: 4/28/2024 8:29:00 PM
Does change of process really change the world? It may change the time it takes to accomplish a task... but have you noticed in some cases ( and perhaps in many) its just made things unnecessarily complicated. All in an effort to "gather your marketing data". So you have to check out and put in your phone number to get your discounts at the grocery store. But you personally had to sign up for that card ( thank god they got over us carrying them). Many innovations are not for common man.
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Date: 4/29/2024 7:00:00 AM
Dear Susan, Thank you for your note and your observation is very astute. While change often promises efficiency, it can sometimes add layers of complexity. The shift towards data-driven processes has blurred the lines between convenience and intrusion, leaving us nostalgic for simpler times. Your insight highlights the disparity between innovation's promise and its accessibility to all. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
Date: 4/27/2024 12:37:00 PM
Sadly they are not going to be free for much longer if the new world order has anything to do with it. I stand by the old way. Great phrasings you used here .love the line about the VHS tape!
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Date: 4/27/2024 3:18:00 PM
Dear Andrea, your comment adds an intriguing layer of social commentary to my poem. Your appreciation for traditional values shines through, filled with the nostalgia blended into the imagery. Thank you for noticing the subtleties, like the reference to the VHS tape. Your support is truly valued. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/26/2024 11:29:00 PM
And so considers every generation..Although Things have changed, decrepitude is timebound So in a way all are still ( in that hidebound.) The Oxygen will cause decay of the cables used to Produce. Anothers will can turn off delete Un-switch.! Is it fate? Will things always be? No Is the answer that comes to me.' I appreciate The words here woven.' Yet they will truly never be Repeated to the man beethoven.'
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Date: 4/27/2024 3:16:00 PM
Hello Joe, your reflection digs into the intricacies of time and change with great insight. Your interpretation adds layers to the poetem, enriching the dialogue between past and present. It's an honor to have my words provoke such contemplation. Thank you for engaging deeply with my poem and for your thought-provoking contribution. Let's continue to explore the mysteries of existence through poetry's timeless lens. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/26/2024 9:32:00 AM
wow Daniel what an entrancing write the love you have for Gen Z shines out fav Hugs Shadow
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Date: 4/26/2024 10:24:00 AM
Dear Shadow, Thank you so much for your heartfelt words. When you have a GelnZ daughter, what is there not to love? Blessings, my Friend!! - Daniel
Date: 4/26/2024 4:04:00 AM
We, Gen Z, the coders, shaping worlds to be free. 'Your world is fading,, a relic, an ancient memory.' Lol. This seems to be a regular in our household—or rather, it used to be—until I decided the only way to win this one was to take the bull by the horns and do one better. If you can't beat them, join them. I do believe it's working, and I've gained a healthy new respect as well. A great write Daniel...Hugs
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Date: 4/26/2024 4:52:00 AM
Dear Maria, your humor and insight shine through your words! It sounds like you've found a clever way to navigate those household debates. Embracing the challenge with creativity is admirable. I'm glad my poem touched you. Thank you for your kind words and hugs!
Date: 4/24/2024 10:24:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/great ending. The date will change/many things do not change. It hard to think this world is fading to AI. I wrote" A time to reflect ~ Is The True Writer Gone" & it is here. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.........................
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Date: 4/24/2024 11:15:00 AM
Dear Paula, your insightful words touched my heart. Your reflection on change in the world and writing's evolution is insightful. Your comments embodies the essence of this shifting landscape. In the age of AI, true writing's significance grows. Thank you for sharing your perspective. Wishing you endless inspiration and creativity in your writing journey. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/24/2024 8:18:00 AM
So wild conversations go on here if you could call them conversations between my grandson now in his thirties and handicapped with Huntington's Disease. I image it can get lively at your home as well. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. The question/s is what is going to happen to future generations. Sara K
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Date: 4/24/2024 8:28:00 AM
Dear Sara, your comment touches me deeply. It's the complexity and beauty of family dynamics, even in challenging circumstances. Your question about future generations where—uncertainty looms, yet love and resilience endure. Thank you for your thoughtful reflection. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/23/2024 10:38:00 PM
Wow Daniel! There's so much going on in there: the imagery, the word play, the rhyme schemes... A major jab at dad. But also love? "You bartered years for baubles, in tenure's fallacy" That hits hard.
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Date: 4/24/2024 6:42:00 AM
Hello Robert, your thoughtful response means a lot to me. Thank you for taking the time to engage with my poem. Your recognition of the various layers within it validates the effort I put into crafting it. Writing this poem was cathartic, helping me wrestle with these feelings. Your acknowledgment of the emotional depth reinforces my belief in the power of poetry to evoke empathy. Thank you once again for your insightful feedback. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/23/2024 1:11:00 AM
I have a feeling I read this. Still great.
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Date: 4/24/2024 6:39:00 AM
Hello Victor, Thank you for stopping by and leaving an excellent comment. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/22/2024 8:14:00 AM
Hi Daniel, the times, they are a changing. In our day, computers weren't so prevalent. Now, AI is everywhere. I remember office's keeping ledgers of information with pencils/pens. Now everything is computerized. An absolutely brilliantly penned poem on all these new things taking place. My very best wishes for the contest with this worthy and strong entry. God's providence to you and your family. ~
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Date: 4/22/2024 8:22:00 AM
Dear Regina, Thank You, and yes, the pace of technological change is shaping our world. It's remarkable how computers and AI have transformed every aspect of our lives. Your nostalgic recollection of ledger-keeping with pencils/pens highlights the profound shift toward computerization. Thank you for your kind words on my poem—it reflects these evolving times. Your well wishes mean a lot, and may God's providence guide us all through these changes. Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/20/2024 2:01:00 AM
old generations had dreams, the reality of new generations, upset everyone, a very sensitive poem, to meditate deeply thanks poet
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Date: 4/20/2024 5:33:00 AM
Dear Yann, yes, we did have dreams where some come to reality and others are fleeting. Thank you for coming and visiting and leaving your kind words. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/19/2024 10:12:00 PM
Despite the stark contrast in the philosophies and outlook on life between the father and the daughter, they love each other and give due respect to what the father upholds in life, though many of his views, in her eyes, are outdated. "In your eyes, I see the pride, despite our disparity, For in this dance of time, we share a rare clarity: Though our paths diverge, our hearts beat in synchrony, Your legacy lives on, in my world of modernity." Such an attitude is a very healthy one and so desirable. The people of our generation cannot make Gen Z to retrace their steps to the bygone past. Your lofty diction is so suiting to the philosophical thoughts the poem carry and depicts the stark change between Then and Now. All the Best dear Daniel.
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Date: 4/20/2024 5:31:00 AM
Dear Valsa, your insightful reflection on my poem deeply touched me. Your words capture the essence of the father-daughter relationship, where love and respect transcend differences in perspectives. Your encouragement to embrace change while honoring tradition reflects a wisdom that transcends generations. Thank you for recognizing the nuances of my poem and for your warm wishes. Your support means a lot to me. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/19/2024 1:10:00 PM
another excellent poem from you, so well thought out and put together, great phrasing, with a certain underlying poignancy..the world turns, and moves on, inevitably...
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Date: 4/19/2024 4:31:00 PM
Dear Charlotte, your recognition means more to me than words can express. Your understanding of the deeper layers within my poetry touches my heart. Indeed, as you so eloquently put it, the world keeps turning, and change is inevitable. Your words are a call to embrace each moment with grace and resilience. Thank you for being a constant source of inspiration and insight in my journey as a poet. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/19/2024 7:58:00 AM
No cubicles confine us, from drudgery's apathy… The epoch you cherished, now a software jubilee… Toppling old monopolies, erasing corporate apathy… You mock "influencer," a term in your scoffery, Yet a viral post can shift markets, with acuity…Faving for I will want to read this again. You show us how we must build bridges with the new generation, at least see through their eyes, though our old ones cling to antiquity ;) I always enjoy reading your poems. So glad you are on PS! Super!
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Date: 4/19/2024 4:30:00 PM
Dear Kim, your words are a breath of fresh air in a world often suffocated by routine. Your ability to blend nostalgia with a forward-looking perspective is inspiring. Thank you for your appreciation of my work and for recognizing the importance of bridging generational gaps. Looking forward to more exchanges of ideas and creativity with you! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/19/2024 1:16:00 AM
There is depth in this lovely poem. A conversation between the young and the old, which I experience often. Written with exquisite poetry, full of metaphoric allusions. Best for a win if this is for the contest.
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Date: 4/19/2024 4:36:00 AM
Dear Victor, your kind words mean a lot to me. I'm delighted that you found depth in the conversation in the poem, mirroring the interactions between different generations that we often witness. Your appreciation for the poetic elements and metaphoric allusions is genuinely heartening. Thank you for your encouragement and support. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/18/2024 8:32:00 PM
Dear Daniel, This poem vividly depicts the clash between old-fashioned morals and the new digital norms, drawing attention to the generational divide and the societal effects of technology. The metaphors and images you used to describe development, uniqueness, and the changing nature of our environment are striking. Utilizing terms such as "relic," "luminaries," "forged kingdoms," "digital artisans," and "software jubilee" reveals an in-depth familiarity with progress and creativity. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 4/19/2024 4:35:00 AM
Dear Sotto, your thoughtful analysis of my poem truly touches me. I'm glad you found resonance in the depiction of the clash between traditional values and contemporary digital norms and the exploration of generational divisions. Your recognition of the metaphors and imagery highlights the effort I put into crafting each word. Your well wishes for the contest mean a lot. Thank you for your encouraging words and keen insights. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/18/2024 3:45:00 PM
I agree, Daniel. Your poem is an excellent match for Ink's contest. I enjoyed the interweaving of the vocabulary of then and now...such visible differences and expectations are viewed through the lense of a conversation between a daughter and father. Hubby and I realize that the world we knew and understood has already faded...slipped through our fingers. We feel like relics or dinosaurs. Well done, Daniel. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 4/19/2024 4:34:00 AM
Dear Sara, Your feedback warms my heart. It's affirming to hear that my poem resonated with you, capturing the essence of generational shifts and the evolving landscape of language and expectations. Your reflection on feeling like relics in today's world adds depth to the conversation. Thank you for your kind words and encouragement. I wish you and your hubby a wonderful weekend as well!- Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/18/2024 3:35:00 PM
Very insightful conversation, Daniel--everyone can relate with the essence of your theme-- of generational differences that result from changes in society, science, and technological innovations, as we age. You captured the theme for me in these lines:--In your eyes, I see the pride, despite our disparity, For in this dance of time, we share a rare clarity: Though our paths diverge, our hearts beat in synchrony, Your legacy lives on, in my world of modernity--
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Date: 4/19/2024 4:33:00 AM
Hello Vijay, your appreciation means a lot. I aimed to echo the universal experience of navigating generational shifts, and it's heartening to know my words touched you. Your highlighting those lines encourages me to continue exploring the interplay between tradition and modernity. Thank you for your thoughtful insights. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/18/2024 3:35:00 PM
Very well written showing the changes in time, patience with understanding. Valuable Daniel :)
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Date: 4/19/2024 4:31:00 AM
Dear Heidi, thank you so much for your visit and it is appreciated. Yes, time, patience, and understanding! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/18/2024 2:34:00 PM
Such a kind father you are to see it in different ways than your own, to relate to her...a powerful 'relic' she knows
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Date: 4/19/2024 4:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paige, for your beautiful comments. - Blessings, Daniel

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