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This was then, in an old pile, a letter I found, Among objects, its whisper profound. Faded ink, thoughts enduring, Emotions, love, timeless, all assuring. First love's note, cherished by my wife, Promises bright, beyond life's strife. Lost vows questioned, emotions stirred, "Why keep false love's faded word?" Blushing smile, her truth unfurled, Your vow, though improvised, my world. In this paper's embrace, love renewed, Gratitude bound, our eternal mood. This is now, email and texting has taken over, I get so many fake love letters over and over, Sometime an old love will text me, Btw idk if still ily? U wre my og, Nvm’m smh, hmu asap, No cap, tbh ily. (Text translation: By the way, I don’t know, if I still love you? You were my original gangster(lover), Never mind, shaking my head, Hit me up as soon as possible, Truthfully, to be honest, I love you)

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Date: 4/23/2024 1:09:00 PM
haha, that last part. I truly needed that translation. Gone are the days of love letters and cards replaced by garbage that could never compare!! great job with the theme.
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Date: 4/19/2024 9:46:00 AM
Such a fantastic entry and perspective, Jay. The initial section of your poem was really enjoyable because of its nostalgic tone.
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Date: 4/18/2024 8:30:00 PM
When emails and WhatsApp didn't exist, letters were the only means of communication. Getting a letter from a friend, that too very rarely was a thrilling experience. Then think of the excitement a love letter can bring..... I enjoyed the anti climax to the moment when you questioned your wife about the faded love letter you found. Interesting poem dear Jay ji.
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Date: 4/18/2024 3:35:00 PM
a wonderful take and entry for the contest, Jay. I enjoyed the nostalgic nature of the first part of your poem...there's something about old cards and letters--seems like I'm physically touching the past...not the same effect with emails and texting. Best wishes with the contest and enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 4/18/2024 1:18:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write with a great picture. Love is very powerful when near or far...... Enjoy your day writing away.............
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