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That Stare

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That Stare

Mind wonders sat in a stare
 drifting again that relaxed state
 where rainbows shimmer
 yes you know a fantasy dream
 where you have wings and fly
 way up high to clouds fluffy white.
Dawn Mclaughlin. @Dawn2012.

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  1. Date: 5/26/2012 4:09:00 PM
    Perfectly captured in words.

    mclaughlin Avatar Dawn mclaughlin
    Date: 5/26/2012 4:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you X