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That Rule Was Begging To Be Broken

That rule was begging to be broken Y’know the one about women? Of conformity for cat calls and Gift wrapped shoulders and legs? How about “no” to breastfeeding How about “whore” for “too revealing”? I’m sick of these notions, it’s too unappealing. I am a nonconformist of a woman The one that daunts you in your wake. Come at me with your “don’t”s for women I’ll show you my scars of everyday crusades. I’ve battled tirades of piercing tongues Of sharp fingers engraved into skins I’m supposed to be hidden beneath them Because I walk like i’m a woman Because I walk like a human being But I stomp these woman feet of mines To tell you “That ain’t gonna be me” Nor will it be any woman in this world ‘Cause that rule was begging to be broken When this woman marched for gender equality.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/16/2016 8:21:00 AM
A deep verse indeed.... Congrats Olivia, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/13/2016 10:30:00 AM
Enjoyed the read...powerful words...Congrats on your high place win. :) Sunita
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Date: 8/12/2016 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Olivia. Next time try to tell us how you really feel...
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Date: 8/12/2016 8:47:00 AM
This is one strong and honest poem,congrats Olivia!
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Date: 8/9/2016 12:30:00 AM
Good luck, Olivia , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 8/6/2016 3:59:00 PM
I forgot to wish you good luck in the contest... by Lewis....
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Date: 8/6/2016 10:21:00 AM
Olivia, you have conquered this site. Joining spot on, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Olivia Handoko
Date: 8/7/2016 10:08:00 AM
Hi, Linda! Thank you for your warm welcoming and encouragement. I am 17 years old and love poetry. I am still very inexperienced (even though I started at a young age: 5th grade), but I will continue to write to improve but also to set my mind free. I would love to tell you my "poetic skills", but I really just write to express. If you want to give me feedback or if you know anyone else who does, I am open to all feedback. Thanks, again. I appreciate it.

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