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That One Enchanted Awaking

As the moon goes up and the sun comes down. We lay together, on the sandy soft ground. When I look into your eyes, I swim in them baby blues. Just like an ocean, I am caught up in the muse. You gather me up and kiss me passionately. Igniting new found feelings inside of me. The wind strums its fingers upon the ocean surface. The beating of our hearts play, as a rhythm showcase. You gently push me back and tell me not today. That the time will be right, when I am to be given away. When that special night arrives and vows are to be traded. It is then, my love, will you be enchanted; by the night that awaits us.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/28/2008 12:01:00 PM
Erin this is full of love and passion. Michael
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Date: 12/28/2008 9:35:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem. This is written so well and it flows so well. Great job!
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