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A man has moved to number thirteen, which a previous resident had left - to go to hospital. She died there. That apartment, see? Number thirteen. This man is a preacher guy – Christian. Look forward to challenging his beliefs in spirity things. He may go mad if I get to take on his fancies. He’s in number thirteen, see? That can bring luck - sometimes good, but often bad. He may be a nice guy. Who knows? But he is at number thirteen. (17.12.22 - written Oct 2022)

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Date: 12/17/2022 8:01:00 AM
I have never known that thirteen is any different from any other number. I think just something a person made up. There are a couple of numbers that have meaning though. Look it up in the Bible, Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Andrew John
Date: 12/22/2022 2:56:00 AM
Thank you for your comment, Sara. Poem isn't meant to say 13 is actually accurate. It makes a joke of 13. Few of us believe it does any harm or any good, any more than we have religion.
Date: 12/17/2022 6:37:00 AM
Fixation on a number. Great poem.
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Date: 12/17/2022 6:55:00 AM
Thank you for a quick comment, KR.

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