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'that Missing Link'

One day after years of searching for that missing link he came along, without warning he meddled with the barricades I build... The things I used to protect myself, fragile me, all exposed and yet the steps we took healed us both... Not realizing that every day our dependence on others for validation were being cut away not knowing we were on a journey of discovery of who we are without faceless crowds dictating our behavior... I've learned to love myself I've learned to love others again without the fear of losing them, I've learned to be happy without being afraid that something sinister might happen we've grown together and we have grown apart but we are always in each other’s hearts Even though we're miles apart our paths have been cemented... Connections remain even distance can't separate... It's a friendship you don't ask questions about it’s a friendship you nurture. Not because you are forced to, But because it’s the one thing That has kept us centered and made me embrace who I really am… I will always be thankful for you… Contest Name : “The Right Time” By : Wilma N. Neels Dedicated to B 020720111955 Contest: The Right Time 1st Place

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Date: 8/10/2011 10:10:00 AM
Terrific writing Wilma, no wonder it won. Belated congratulations on your success. I would mail you some snow for a snowball fight, sadly it would just melt, grrrrrrr :)
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Date: 7/19/2011 5:19:00 PM
Wilma, this very special person in your life is also very lucky to have you too.
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Date: 7/18/2011 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Wilma in the contest of Michael J Falotico "The Right Time" Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2011 4:32:00 PM
A sensational free verse, Wilma. Many congrats on your WELL DESERVED WIN. Lainie
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Date: 7/17/2011 3:30:00 PM
This sure is one super wonderful win for you, missy :) really liked this one, very well deserved :) Congrats on your win :D mwahugs
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Date: 7/17/2011 12:21:00 PM
Congrautlations on your well deserved 1st place win on this heartwarming tribute to your friend. Love Glenna
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Date: 7/17/2011 6:01:00 AM
cheery kudos to you for the amazing , top award. wilms!! :) huggs
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Date: 7/17/2011 5:21:00 AM
congrats on your top spot win with this excellent write..cory
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Date: 7/16/2011 10:44:00 PM
Very good...congrats on your win...
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Date: 7/16/2011 8:47:00 PM
well-said and narrated....^-^ junjun ~~~~CONGRATULATIONS~
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Date: 7/16/2011 2:11:00 PM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Wilma and proud sharing the prize with you,
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Date: 7/16/2011 2:02:00 PM
ahhhh I hear YOU nothing in the world's as priceless as a true friend! Light & Love
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Date: 7/16/2011 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Wilma.
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Date: 7/16/2011 1:24:00 PM
Many congrats on your wins, my friend : )
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Date: 7/16/2011 11:51:00 AM
congrats on your win, well done David
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Date: 7/16/2011 10:27:00 AM
Congrats Wilma on your well deserved first place win with this dynamic entry my friend.. enjoy top spot with luv..
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Date: 7/16/2011 9:15:00 AM
Congrats on this amazing write and your 1st place win....thank you....love Michael
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Date: 7/16/2011 8:50:00 AM
Finding a friend that can help you achieve this is something to be treasured. Congrats on your win Wilma. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 7/4/2011 2:27:00 PM
I love reading this, nicely written Wilma... Thanks for sharing this with us!
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Date: 7/3/2011 1:32:00 PM
Lovely tribute to B, Wilma. Hope you're having a great weekend - or is it already Monday there? It's 9.30 on Sunday evening here : )
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Date: 7/3/2011 10:12:00 AM
a creative and well written piece of work. thank you for commenting on Rain Finally Came.
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Date: 7/3/2011 9:58:00 AM
This is such a touching write, Wilma and you ended this with such a heartfelt line-- I really do believe that this friend of yours (I think I have an idea, although of course I could be wrong :p) I think it is awesome that you had each other's company at that point in your lives-- but you are right, the memories will be treasured and you are always grateful==wonderful entry for the contest-- mwahugs :D
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Date: 7/3/2011 9:10:00 AM
You put a capitol F on Friendship. How valuable and sometimes elusive it is. Great write. BobQ
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Date: 7/3/2011 5:44:00 AM
Someone very special must have inspired this eloquent poem, Wilma. So glad you have someone for whom you are thankful. I am thankful for your friendship. Best wishes in the contest! Love and blessings, Carolyn (Posted an "Unsolved Mysteries" contest, but don't know if that topic will interest you.) Leaving for Key Biscayne shortly. Much love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/2/2011 11:20:00 PM
wow, I envy you that you have someone like this to even write about. I am totally without any inspiration on this one. I think you have done an excellent job and I predict a high win for this beauty!
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