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That Day That Hour That Minute That Second

The wind was warm and fresh The sky was evening blue. The street was full of life The car was small and white The car lights were crisp and bright. My feet felt so very light. Something was in the air that night. My heart beat skipped for sure I saw you behind the door. That day, that hour, that minute, that second changed my life. I could see through the darkest night. Powerful emotions took over my life I knew one day that you would be my wife Your smile took over my heart Your eyes took over my mind Everything about you affected about me. I will never forget your smile and the look from your beautiful eyes. On that day, that hour, that minute, that second.... You changed my life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/29/2016 7:16:00 PM
A lovely romantic poem.. BLESSINGS & PEACE
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A Yorkshire Poet
Date: 1/30/2016 4:38:00 AM
Hi Lewis, thanks very much. Cheers.
Date: 1/29/2016 6:25:00 PM
romantic and very well written!!! it put a smile on my face while reading it...
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Date: 1/29/2016 6:27:00 PM
Hi Sirajali, thanks very much, glad it made you smile. Cheers.

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