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Thanks Giving

Days swim pass as fish swims, human forget They are once fish______life in ocean That finally came to dirt What is as helpful as does the moon? Moon is god, a glorification 19/6/2015 Contest: five lines/ metaphor and simile Sponsor by Sara Kendrick

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2015 2:30:00 PM

hey,I enjoyed reading this. "Good luck in the contest, Afolobi

Constance La France

Date: 6/21/2015 7:56:00 AM

Afol, oh I see you are presenting us with a contradiction, some believe God created humans in his image, therefore we were never fish, however if you believe the scientist then we were fish. Very thought provoking, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, song bird

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/21/2015 2:43:00 PM

Not only human but all life began in ocean.

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/21/2015 2:21:00 PM

Yes BW we are never a fish, I heard this story that in the beginning human are living in ocean and this is true, you can search fro it on internet. My write here is not that Human is fish but human is like fish then, thanks for take your time to comment on my poem.

Oluwatomiwo Akinyemi

Date: 6/21/2015 6:09:00 AM

nice poem. thanks for visiting my page.

Austin Eseke

Date: 6/20/2015 3:28:00 AM

GREAT JOB! keep it up...and keep the flag flying..

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/20/2015 1:39:00 AM

You said a lot in these five lines. Great job! Good luck in the contest:) Alexis

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/20/2015 12:47:00 AM

Well expressed, good luck in the contest.