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Thanks From a Mouse

Thanks from a mouse The gray mouse lives under the stairs. At night we can hear him go for the cheese I watched on Thanksgiving night. As he carried the cheese to please the others that gathered. As they start to eat they all stopped as if to say like to express my thanks. The moral of the story is all Gods creatures give Thanks for what they have.

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Date: 11/19/2014 3:34:00 PM
A great story and win. I wrote one a few years ago on a mouse pilfering goodies on Christmas Eve. This one reminded me of it. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/19/2014 11:46:00 AM
Thanks. Congratulations on your win with this moral well placed.
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Date: 11/19/2014 9:53:00 AM
I like this Harold. So sweet. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/18/2014 6:44:00 PM
cute write and a lovely moral - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/17/2014 6:43:00 AM
I do agree. Only men are the exceptions. but not always. They are freaks. Wonderful love.
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