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Thank You Good People

I find myself irritated Almost everyday I wish people would leave me alone And finally just get out of my way This pressure is building up in me I fear it’s going to burst I try to release these feelings That way no one will get hurt But every time I relax Seems someone new is on my back This train is on a certain course And it’s beginning to come off the tracks So I submit all of these poems In hopes that it will help But this rage is too controlling It’s a feeling that I’ve never felt For I will forever fight longer And try and remain calm But if this pressure gets stronger Then it will surely go off like a bomb For when this bomb goes off I hope and pray no one’s around Especially the people I love If so a new person will be found A person full of rage and disappointment A person who is no longer loved Someone who was once looked up too Had admirers but now has none So I will try and diffuse this bomb My bomb of rage and misery With my thoughts and kind words I believe you call this poetry But I give my thanks To all the great poets On Poetry Soup.com You deserve it and you know it For lending me your eyes and ears And especially all of your hearts I thank you all for listening And for that this bomb won’t blow apart

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Date: 7/26/2009 5:50:00 AM
Another great free verse, Keep writting and keep the train on the track,Bill
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Date: 7/26/2009 4:12:00 AM
Great descriptiveness expressing how most everyone has felt at sometime or another. Keep writing. Sara
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