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Thank You For Driving Drunk

I pretend to forget, So I don't feel the pain. Bottled emotion, I don't want to claim. Tears form, At the mention of her name, Life without her, Just isn't the same. You took from us, A Daughter, a cousin, a friend. Because of your stupidity, Her life had to end. I hear those words constantly, Inside my head. They still sound so foreign, "Heather is dead" And when the phone rings, It fills me with dread, It should have been you, In the coffin instead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/9/2009 12:30:00 PM
yes horrid we all must remember NOT to drive in said state..we don't just hurt ourselves! Light & Love
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Date: 8/25/2009 4:12:00 AM
So sad Erica. I am so sorry for your loss. Outstanding writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2009 6:43:00 PM
I have one at home that won't listen. I guess too many have to learn the hard way. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 8/24/2009 4:45:00 PM
i am sorry for your loss, these tragedies could be avoided so easily if people just used common sense ... great poem :)
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Date: 8/24/2009 3:53:00 PM
Your rage is well justified, Erica. Drinking and driving can lead to tragedy. Hearing of her death must have felt like a wave of sadness washing over you. How sad. I hope others will learn from your excellent poem so we'll see fewer DUI deaths. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/24/2009 1:44:00 PM
hear hear hear, I agree 1000000%. No second chances for anyone driving drunk. I say this as a parent of an adult alcoholic child who should be in jail for life for just this crime - driving drunk not for killing anyone. I know your pain is unbearable.
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Date: 8/24/2009 1:12:00 PM
Topic that needs to be written about from many points of view to available to public. Keep writing. Sara
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