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me Hi darling I’m on break I miss you him Hi honey I am working miss you too me Let’s just leave for home early today him Longing for some seasoned love play me Just need to feel your loving arms him I hunger also for your kiss n charms For David Williams contest: Text Talk

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Date: 9/9/2012 12:31:00 AM
cool one! good luck
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/9/2012 12:32:00 AM
rush home NOW!
Date: 8/30/2012 4:34:00 PM
Good luck in David William's contest..I have not tried to write one for this one yet..The content of your poem reads like so many couples today who don't have enough time for each other..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, children as a whole have things to play with today without having to make do but some still have to invent and some still use their imagination..Sara
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Joy Wellington
Date: 8/30/2012 5:10:00 PM
Yep...that's what it is, not enough time so one has to prioritize at some time of the other. God bless Sara!
Date: 8/30/2012 2:50:00 PM
that's a lovely and romantic poem, nice rhyme. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Joy Wellington
Date: 8/30/2012 5:11:00 PM
Hugs back at you Erich!
Date: 8/30/2012 1:49:00 PM
It was a sweet conversation, Joy. Hurry home .... Good luck in the contest. oxox smile and hug / / Anne-Lise :)
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/9/2012 12:32:00 AM
heehee
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Joy Wellington
Date: 8/30/2012 5:18:00 PM
awww...Anne Lise. You made me giggle! I wrote the poem, but just stood aside and saw myself running home with a sense of "Anticipation"....one of my prior poems. Thanks much!
Date: 8/30/2012 1:44:00 PM
lovely write, Joy : )
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