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Testing the Sun

Testing The Sun Its about to happen You can feel it There’s a bursting scented vibrancy Lingering Happening Almost Ready A slow stretching yawn reverberates It dissipates and grows Permeates Percolates Rushes outward But Waits Sleepily cracking an eye It peers around Secretly shaking off blankets Dabbles a toe in the air Testing the sun If you wait, listen to the stillness You can hear rising sap Drawing deep upward to buds Which seem to scream a new green And yearn for the moment of leaves The colours are mixing Designing chemicals of fluorescence Predicting their flourishes of blooming petals Teasing Niggling At the edges of their swelling And somnolent slumbery Deliberating On seconds They A – C – H – E In yellow Mimosa puffs Already they are dreaming Caught between the spurt of seed Dreaming of splashes fecundate And the tiny feet of insects The great call of their rainbow hues Is ready to set a fire In time to stride in their glory Through to summer But Wait The tiny buds have yet to taste A drop of rain And yet to bask for at least a day In golden heat Precipitates Perambulates Perchance to ponder Proliferates Languid time Wakes Timeless Spring

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Date: 3/11/2009 1:01:00 AM
wonderful write... your creativity is outstanding! love the way you ended and title is just perfect!! BRAVO :) ~ Arany
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Date: 3/10/2009 4:58:00 PM
OMG got no adjectives. Awesome alliteration, amazing words. Beginning to wonder what you are doing here. Flippin out over your writes. I see you have another one. I'm almost afraid to read it. Sorry, I am trying to be calm here. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/10/2009 1:24:00 PM
Love the title..cool....you are a talent my friend and your words paint the picture very well..well done...thanks for the love on my poems.
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Date: 3/10/2009 1:07:00 PM
Wow...this is wonderful, Colin!! Puts warm glow on this day. Had you written this before Christie's Soul of Sunshine contest....this would have been a winner for sure!! Loved it! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 3/10/2009 12:13:00 PM
Colin, your writing is always so clear. Your messages are not muddled by images, but empowered by them. Great use of illiteration and awesome structure in this poem on spring blossoms. I'm so glad you share your work on this site! Indeed, we share a kindred spirit when it comes to Native Americans, but I sense unity in other ways as well. Love, Carolyn
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