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Terrified / Excited

The elegance of your proclamation, Enchanting divinity of your tone. Quaking and naïve, hidden by laughter. My embrace belies my apprehension. The distilled belief that you perspire Is a pheromone that intimidates. Gestures of your assertive intent Arouses a medley of emotions.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/19/2009 6:50:00 AM
You are a wonderful writer friend..your words speaks of brilliance..cool writing.
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Date: 5/18/2009 7:58:00 PM
Dear Paul, First off I'd like to say Welcome to the SOUP I see by YOUR Write ; You are a Romanticist So am I Superb Write I Thank-YOU For YOUR Gracious comment On my work " Acid Reflections " ( Y E S i think ) ALWAYS.. .HG
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Date: 5/18/2009 5:40:00 PM
Paul, You do have a way with words that alludes to some serenely flowing romantic place. Nice job. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/18/2009 8:38:00 AM
This is a winner..each verse just rang through with force and awe..well written art my friend.
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