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Terrible Night

He has no idea he hurt me He will never know he abused me Tore my soul wide open I hold onto the pain Like a terrible broken treasure It’s mine Only mine You’re stronger than me Now we know You get your way Now I know Are you proud? It wasn’t my first But I will never forget The night you thought I was playing The night you fought for my love Took the “love” you wanted I keep the clothes to never forget The night that zipper broke My reminder to never trust a guy Now no one will know Not even you. I wasn’t playing..

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Skat A

Date: 5/21/2016 9:38:00 AM

that's crazy enjoyed. skat

Thomas Carney

Date: 9/5/2015 2:44:00 PM

The poem is written in two persons, 1st and 2nd, but I think we know who the "you" and "you're" is. I do this, so don't know where you got it, but free standing lines >>> CAPS to start each line, give power and command, and no end stops, except if you need a ? Bravo there, bravo. Relationships with boys in high school never go anywhere except drama and possible pregnancy, which ruins the life of the single mother. Forget guys and get your act together. Get your degree and focus. Thomas

Jan Allison

Date: 9/1/2015 6:28:00 PM

Heartbreaking emotional write on abuse Bubbles:-( hugs jan xx