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Tere Nal Judein Jajbaat

Tere nal jude jajbat Kar koi galbaat Nikher jave sohni raat Pigal jan sare jajbaat Kerde pyar Ho jave parbhaat Bane koi yaadgaar pyarwali Sohni tu mai tera mahiwaal Kerna tenu raj raj pyar Haa ker ek baar Munda mit jaan nu tyar Kare tere nal pyar Fix ker koi mulakat Bhul dunia de khoaf aaja paa laiye jaffian Jod pret nal pret Ban sohni meri meet Gaa ishqe da geet Aaja ek kariye ek haar jeet Paa rijha suchian Jod pret nal pret Ban sohni meri meet Gaa ishqe da geet Aaja ek kariye ek haar jeet Paa rijha suchian

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2013 10:20:00 PM

Hi Rajni. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda

Skat A

Date: 5/25/2013 12:10:00 PM

Your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~