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Tense Like Cactus 3

Have you ever thought with an iced mind its worse than swimming in shallow water. A coin received in hard days Is like a cactus plant in the desert An open mind Is bearable like the leaves of a tree useful to man and the soil The days when you make a mistake And your achievements sunk to the existence of a zombie among the living.

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