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Tenderly Crushed Grapes

tenderly crushed grapes
perfectly producing wine
overly sour juice

tenderly crushed grapes
perfectly producing wine
made liquid hatred

tenderly crushed grapes
perfectly producing wine
romance billows in

Entered into Alfred Vassallo's "Bacchus The God Who Loved His Grapes" contest

5/1/2013

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Len Gasun Date: 5/24/2013 12:34:00 AM This is a great chain of haiku my dear friend Russell! I'm so happy to read it once again today! Congratulations once more on your awesome win my friend! love and big hugs, Leonora Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 5/20/2013 11:20:00 PM I congratulate you on the placement here Russell i also enjoyed reading this entry..' Joe..) Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 5/19/2013 6:56:00 PM Awwww yes the romance....congratulations Russell Login to Reply

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 5/19/2013 2:40:00 PM Russell congratulations on your win. It's a well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie Login to Reply

Therese Bacha Date: 5/19/2013 1:59:00 PM Hello my friend, congratulations for the very well deserved Honorable Mention, as usual excellent poetry. Love T. Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 5/19/2013 5:54:00 AM A sweet magic out of intoxication of red wine drink wonderfully adorned. Wish you a great congratulation on your win. Loved always.....,bl Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 5/19/2013 2:18:00 AM My heartfelt congratulations on your win my dear friend Russell. So glad to read and comment on this for the second time. This is really awesome! So love it! Thank you so much for sharing and again for taking time to read my works leaving me wonderful and inspiring comments. More blessings to you and good luck always! love and big hugs, Leonora Login to Reply

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 5/18/2013 10:34:00 PM Congrats on your fine win Russell. I love the last haiku. AO Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/18/2013 8:29:00 PM Russell, congratulations with your way 2 xool winning poem in Alfred's "Bacchus The God Who Loved His Grapes" contest. always~ Linda Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 5/18/2013 5:31:00 PM interesting verse, Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/6/2013 11:36:00 PM by the way , my favorite is the last one about romance! Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 5/2/2013 3:39:00 AM Wow! I super like this haiku of yours my very dear friend and one of my fav. poets, Russell. You really did it very well! A winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing and my awesome win in your contest. It's my great honor. Million thanks for everything! love lots, Leonora Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 5/1/2013 11:16:00 PM I enjoyed your take on this contest Russell. I love to dine with wine. Best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/1/2013 11:13:00 PM gosh, you have a literal one and then two others that are direct contrasts. It will be fun to see who Alfred chooses for his winners in this unique contest. Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/1/2013 11:07:00 PM Dear Russell, each time I will drink wine, this is what I will think, especially the third part! I hope I will not get drunk! Beautiful! Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 5/1/2013 9:52:00 PM Wow...very Cool.... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/1/2013 4:34:00 PM Interesting work..Reads like a winner to me...Enjoyed reading it tonight...That overly sour juice is interesting..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the time spent at my work..Sara Login to Reply