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Tender Years

We were just eighteen Tender years you and I share We saved up for gas Put in my old Beetle Bug Never knew if it would run Or, if it would last No air in that car Hot summer days in the South Our makeup running Hair falling, need aqua net So, our hair would reach the sky Radio plays loud Oingo Boingo, Tears for Fears 38 Special Four Non Blondes, Flock of Seagulls Listened to all of those years We went to dances And, tried out the ”The Running Man” Getting our groove on “Moon Walk,”, The “Cabbage Batch,” next Trying to learn all of these The crowd just passes We skinny-dipped, too Harper’s lake, not to be seen To the cabin fast Oh, what will our mothers’ think? A secret to keep Those tender years had My best friend, just you and me Always together It will last, time tried and true Fun times, sad times, all times real Fond memories, still. ©Holly P. Moore December 2012 "Tender Year's" Contest

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Date: 1/6/2013 6:03:00 PM
Joyous youth well portrayed...Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/28/2012 4:44:00 PM
Holly.. a wonderful win in Gail Angel Doyle's "tender year" contest... have yourself a wonderful 2013... always! PD
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Date: 12/28/2012 11:18:00 AM
This is so beautiful! Big congratulations on your top win my dear friend, Holly! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/28/2012 1:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your top spot win Holly love xx
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Date: 12/27/2012 11:16:00 PM
congrats Holly on a superb write and win emoting tender feelings luv..
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Date: 12/27/2012 10:10:00 PM
What beautiful memories to share with a good friend. Congratulations. Holly. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/27/2012 7:21:00 PM
I love how you relived your youths' memories in this one. Wonderful to read. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/27/2012 2:52:00 PM
Stopped by again to congratulate you on your win. Awesome!
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Date: 12/16/2012 7:25:00 AM
Holly these are very good memories penned extremely well, love the skinny dipping bit....David
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Date: 12/15/2012 2:50:00 PM
Very nicely done choka series, Holly...I owned 3 'beetle bugs', one being a 1957...we drove it from California to SC when I got out of the Navy...took us 2 months to get home! (many stops along the way)...Thanks for this poem - Tim
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Date: 12/15/2012 11:14:00 AM
Oh Holly ,the time will come to us when all that is left is the memories. Hold on tight there are so precious. Very well written. Merry Christmas Anne
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Date: 12/15/2012 8:05:00 AM
you know Holly, this is brilliant , this poem all about wonderful memories, is so inspiring, he tells me to hang on to those happy days, because like a recipe, it mixes and blends for the future.
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Date: 12/15/2012 6:06:00 AM
Ah yes fond memories! Enjoyed your poem. Nostalgic. Wishing you many more fond memories yet to come.
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