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Tender Moments

All of the tender moments we shared, When you held my hand and told me you cared; Bring to each day a new fascination, With lips to kiss, a heart filled with elation. Come lie with me in fields of sweet clover, Where honey bees fly and the scent hovers over; Where all we feel is always new, And minutes are plenty but the hours are few. Let me hold you close and look in your eyes, And speak all the words my heart denies; For when I hold you near I can feel my heart, Beating each moment till we have to part. And as we walk our ways into a setting sun, The parting of ways will merge as one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/3/2012 10:27:00 AM
you are sure a wonderful poet Elizabeth, although a lot of sadness in your poetry, and that is so beautiful in its own way.. it says a lot aboout you as a person, one with such a lot of love to give to someone, that i'm sure that would be one very lucky person.. i just love what you write, sorry if i go on abit...but your worth it...
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Date: 6/30/2012 6:52:00 AM
'...all we feel is always new,' isn't it the way with an enduring love? Time just seems to stand still. :)
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Date: 12/28/2011 6:51:00 PM
I don't usually allow myself to be taken in with the feelings or emotional words of a romantic poem but somehow your poem trapped me into this one. Got me! Dang! Nice job of it .
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Date: 6/27/2011 10:56:00 AM
Delightful reading Elizabeth, it makes me want to be there, nice one :)
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Date: 6/5/2011 7:33:00 PM
Elizabeth, a very lovely poem,, even the walk emerging as one,,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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