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Tender Loving Sweet

We would see each other standing there and know we were meant to be you would have never guessed wed end up here forgetting who we are and everything we see. I changed my life around i never even cried the angel deep inside of me became the devil in your eyes. the words you spoke to me the darkness in your voice the creature living inside of you became the demon ruling your life you said you wouldnt hurt me like all the ones before you said you would always love me forever and ever more you took your time to say this wrote every line twice making sure you had it perfect even spoken in your sweetest voice I cant believe your leaving Everyone frozen in disbelief that you could be so heartless yet so tender loving and sweet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/27/2010 10:51:00 PM
Such a heartheld write,, loved it, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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