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Tender Lips

When he whispers my name ,he makes my heart bleed out for him... When he touch my face with his soft hands so slowly, he pulls my soul out of hell... When he holds me so tight tell I can't breathe , he makes me melt inside his beloving arms... He bite my tongue and I bite his soft , tender lips... He capture me with every word , with every touch , with every heart beat... I love him for who he truly are , for his beautiful soul , his sweet words .... When I hear his lovely voice... But..... I never saw his face.....

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White Sage

Date: 1/17/2016 2:56:00 PM

wow D! mind blowing...such nice imagery, lovely words...excellent write there D

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/18/2016 6:14:00 PM

Thank you dear I'm glad you liked it , hugs / / :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 12/26/2015 2:16:00 AM

Perhaps he needs you to feel his love before he can have youe see and feel his face Dalia. No part of you goes untouched in this romantic poem that lifts the heart and heats the soul, "When he touches my face with his soft hands so slowly, he pulls my soul out of hell..." youve seen the face of love, only love can do that my Violet Poetess...J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/26/2015 5:47:00 AM

Thanks alot my dear friend u might be right maybe he needs time to make me feel his love , I never saw his face but I can imagine him in my dreams though I don't care about what he looks like white or dark , fat or skinny , short or tall , I fell in love with his personality and with his romantic soul I don't care about anything else , so if he needs time I'm gonna give him time until he get to know me better , until he learn to trust me and trust my love...eventually there's nothing more greater than love and united souls ....I appreciate ur visit and ur mesmerizing comment..lot of hugs / / :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/17/2015 1:08:00 PM

- An exciting meeting ...... lovely written, Dalia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/17/2015 1:19:00 PM

Thank you very much my sweet Anne for ur lovely comment, I really do appreciate it...and I wish you a happy holiday and a beautiful merry Christmas...hugs / / :D