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Your mounted passion climbs, and I’m replete 
With glow, to open mouth of eve-song’s  fire 
Inside your breath, as tender glances heat, 
Embracing this and that; lanterns conspire.
Fingers trace our names among hungry stars, 
Deepening blaze of love and quest for time,
And twilight warms one breath to yield afar
Thus, giving way to lip-kissed hours sublime.
We taste the wine of affection with grace
As rising dawn acknowledges our rites, 
For passion is supreme, in dream’s embrace
On heady walks where laughter pure excites.

Until one day, a farewell drowns our lore
When moments strayed as endings, nevermore.

~Inspired by Meatloaf's Song with the theme
on the polarity of passion( expressed through love,
romance and devotion), and the indifference from
such by parting in the end. 

Songs to Poetry of Debbie Guzzi
by nette onclaud)

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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 9:26:00 PM
    nice win.SKAT

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 9:03:00 AM
    Way to go ...Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 4:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your awesome win!

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 8:43:00 PM
    Hi Nette, Awesome Songs to Poetry ... congrats~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 6:20:00 PM
    Beautiful and Lovely piece,Nette...Well written..Congrats on your win....

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 5:59:00 AM
    Wow!...Another romantic gem written with grace and elegance...Congrats - Tim

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 1:08:00 AM
    Congratulations on your deserved second place Nette.An outstanding poem.How are you ? : )

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 12:11:00 AM
    Oh my , This one takes ones breath away ! Great Job ,,congratulations !! I love this contrast and all the poems I wish to read.

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 7:58:00 PM
    great write Nette...I like your take on that song...always have loved meatloaf...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 7:26:00 PM
    Congrad's on your verse winning! [fingers trace our names among the hungry stars fav line] Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 4:07:00 PM
    What a passionate piece! Your constructed this poem very well. Nice work! Cindy

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 10:50:00 PM
    Your poem bears the seeds of beauty. Hungry stars, what a ravishing phrase.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 10:20:00 PM
    Every lines feed with feelings and i love attraction of love and the depth of pain in your work.Well done....

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 6:13:00 PM
    This makes me think of attractions and all the times I felt attached to someone and then a goodbye came. These feelings are painful ones. You are a gem.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:11:00 AM
    Passionate poem bears to the depth of heart feelings. Nice imagery lovely done. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 5:12:00 AM

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 11:45:00 PM
    A very lovely & passionate write this is my dear friend Nette. I love each line and the ending is beautifully sad. I extremely love & enjoyed so much this precious gem of yours. Thanks a lot for sharing! Have a blessed weekend to you and your love ones! love much, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 7:47:00 PM
    This is such a tenderhearted and sensual write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem this evening, such awesome insight you have within life and love Nette! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 5:30:00 PM
    Great sonnet..If for a contest, reads like winning material..Passion you express so well..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am glad that you stopped by with you encouraging comments..Sara

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 3:37:00 PM
    - Thank you for a beautiful and soft poem that pleases one's heart. - Have a nice weekend my friend Nette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)