Get Your Premium Membership

Tender Glances Heat

Your mounted passion climbs, and I’m replete With glow, to open mouth of eve-song’s fire Inside your breath, as tender glances heat, Embracing this and that; lanterns conspire. Fingers trace our names among hungry stars, Deepening blaze of love and quest for time, And twilight warms one breath to yield afar Thus, giving way to lip-kissed hours sublime. We taste the wine of affection with grace As rising dawn acknowledges our rites, For passion is supreme, in dream’s embrace On heady walks where laughter pure excites. Until one day, a farewell drowns our lore When moments strayed as endings, nevermore. ~Inspired by Meatloaf's Song with the theme on the polarity of passion( expressed through love, romance and devotion), and the indifference from such by parting in the end. Songs to Poetry of Debbie Guzzi by nette onclaud)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/13/2013 9:26:00 PM
nice win.SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 10/11/2013 9:03:00 AM
Way to go ...Congrats..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 10/11/2013 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/10/2013 8:43:00 PM
Hi Nette, Awesome Songs to Poetry ... congrats~ LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 10/8/2013 6:20:00 PM
Beautiful and Lovely piece,Nette...Well written..Congrats on your win....
Login to Reply
Date: 10/8/2013 5:59:00 AM
Wow!...Another romantic gem written with grace and elegance...Congrats - Tim
Login to Reply
Date: 10/8/2013 1:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your deserved second place Nette.An outstanding poem.How are you ? : )
Login to Reply
Date: 10/8/2013 12:11:00 AM
Oh my , This one takes ones breath away ! Great Job ,,congratulations !! I love this contrast and all the poems I wish to read.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/7/2013 7:58:00 PM
great write Nette...I like your take on that song...always have loved meatloaf...congrats on your win :)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/7/2013 7:26:00 PM
Congrad's on your verse winning! [fingers trace our names among the hungry stars fav line] Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 9/16/2013 4:07:00 PM
What a passionate piece! Your constructed this poem very well. Nice work! Cindy
Login to Reply
Date: 9/15/2013 10:50:00 PM
Your poem bears the seeds of beauty. Hungry stars, what a ravishing phrase.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/15/2013 10:20:00 PM
Every lines feed with feelings and i love attraction of love and the depth of pain in your work.Well done....
Login to Reply
Date: 9/15/2013 6:13:00 PM
This makes me think of attractions and all the times I felt attached to someone and then a goodbye came. These feelings are painful ones. You are a gem.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/15/2013 11:11:00 AM
Passionate poem bears to the depth of heart feelings. Nice imagery lovely done. Loved always, bl
Login to Reply
Date: 9/15/2013 5:12:00 AM
VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITTING
Login to Reply
Date: 9/14/2013 11:45:00 PM
A very lovely & passionate write this is my dear friend Nette. I love each line and the ending is beautifully sad. I extremely love & enjoyed so much this precious gem of yours. Thanks a lot for sharing! Have a blessed weekend to you and your love ones! love much, Leonora
Login to Reply
Date: 9/14/2013 7:47:00 PM
This is such a tenderhearted and sensual write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem this evening, such awesome insight you have within life and love Nette! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/14/2013 5:30:00 PM
Great sonnet..If for a contest, reads like winning material..Passion you express so well..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am glad that you stopped by with you encouraging comments..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 9/14/2013 3:37:00 PM
- Thank you for a beautiful and soft poem that pleases one's heart. - Have a nice weekend my friend Nette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/14/2013 3:15:00 PM
This goes on my favorites list. What a beautiful, sensual poem you've written. Somehow the sad ending makes it all the more tender... jack
Login to Reply
Date: 9/14/2013 2:25:00 PM
Sentimental and romantic..Ow gee that farewell..So sad but how beautiful ..Lovely
Login to Reply
Date: 9/14/2013 1:45:00 PM
Intensely sensual, my dear....beautiful.....WOW!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/14/2013 1:32:00 PM
PENNED REALLY A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things