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And in my meditation, I touch a sapphire deep blue talisman, A bracelet, radiant with magic juju, I am transported to a rhapsodic garden; Oh peaceful and heavenly this idyllic place of magical flowers picturesque, The plethora and profusion of color staggering and I am filled with felicity. Hidden, unseen many birds are singing dulcet tunes for me, I dance, twirling and swirling in the flood of beauty, glittering and sparkling; Chrysalis, wings of a butterfly, unfolding, then the scene is evanescent, And in my meditation, I touch a sapphire deep blue talisman. ________________________ January 21, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Ten Word Challenge Copyright Protected, ID 16-747-916-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for, Ten Word Challenge sponsor, Silent One Third Place

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Date: 1/23/2016 9:52:00 AM
BW, I love the way you took Silent One's ten-word challenge and created your lovely poem that brings us into your realm of meditation. Wonderful imagery! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/23/2016 4:07:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for your lovely comment, that was a fun challenge, and thanks for the hugs too !
Date: 1/22/2016 7:35:00 AM
Excellent ethereal write, BW.
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Date: 1/23/2016 12:26:00 AM
James, thanks for visiting and for the excellent, oh I love that word ethereal ~
Date: 1/22/2016 12:51:00 AM
gosh, did he give this challenge to just a few individuals? I had not heard of this. You did awesome with the words, Constance!!
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Date: 1/22/2016 5:06:00 AM
Andrea, yes it was given to a few of us, thanks so much for the awesome ~
Date: 1/21/2016 9:44:00 PM
Beautiful! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 1/22/2016 5:10:00 AM
Eve, thanks for the beautiful. It is not for a contest but just a challenge sent to me by Silent to create a poem with those ten words ~
Date: 1/21/2016 7:30:00 PM
BW...you've used the words so perfectly, excellent write
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Date: 1/21/2016 7:43:00 PM
Sage, thanks for visiting and for the excellent, I love that word ~

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