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Ten Strait Lines

Upon my wrist are ten strait lines and there they stay for all of time they show my pain from day to day and i know they'll never fade One for my father who wasn't there one for my mother who didn't care one for my grandma who gave me away one for a crush who said no way one for a boy who broke my heart and another who watched me fall apart and one more who wanted to be friends and those who let our friendship end one for my aunt who said I was nuts and for those who didn't notice the cuts Upon my wrists are ten strait lines and there they stay for all of time they show my pain from day to day and I know they'll never fade

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Date: 3/18/2012 11:40:00 AM
Such a sad poem, but don't give up on people there are a lot os good caring one's out there. Love Carol xx
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Date: 3/16/2012 1:37:00 PM
Thank you for scharing your poem,very well written but sad. - Have a lovely weekend kassidi ! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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