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Ten Lives In Alabama

There’s ten lives in Alabama, That lost their lives yesterday. An afternoon of bloodshed, With innocent lives at bay. A terrifying rampage, Three communities in shock. For two Alabama counties, Were plagued of random shots. In four different locations, A repeated tragic panorama. My heart goes out to the families, Of the ten lives in Alabama. __________________________ To the ten lives lost in Alabama, an appalling tragedy...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/29/2009 10:26:00 AM
A horrid thing but great tribute.
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Date: 3/24/2009 7:59:00 PM
Tragic loss they faced, my heart went out to them on that sad day.
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Date: 3/23/2009 11:08:00 PM
Very sad and tragic, nice dedication. Tyler
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Date: 3/13/2009 4:02:00 PM
Very heartfelt dedication, Raul. I agree. Absolutely appalling tragedy. Love, Robin
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Date: 3/12/2009 2:37:00 PM
Touching poem for a sad day in Alabama. My heart and prayers go out to them also. DN
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Date: 3/12/2009 6:26:00 AM
wonderful.. dedication.. tragic.. but I could feel your sympathy-- in this write
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Date: 3/11/2009 8:56:00 AM
This is so touching and my heart agrees with every word. Sad yet beautiful dedication. This truly shows the sensitivity within your soul. smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/11/2009 6:36:00 AM
Beautiful dedication, Raul, my heart goes out to them. So terrible, what is this world coming to... or rather, has already come to. Love, Amy
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Date: 3/11/2009 6:34:00 AM
A horrible and senseless tragedy. A most thoughtful and well written dedication. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/11/2009 4:05:00 AM
That was awful when I heard it on the news.. senseless..
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Date: 3/11/2009 1:53:00 AM
Twerrible, terrible, terrible...I just don't get it. kind dedication, Raul, love, Kristin
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