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Temptation Itches On All Living Things

Temptation Itches On All Living Things Temptation itches on all living things often nobody knows just how it stings, not the icky-glues in its sticky pastes nor the rotten fruits in its wasted wastes. She the vixen nobody could resist her vanishing pleasures - elusive mists, long legs descend from heavenly skies later, such dark pains in lamented cries. Victim once thought to be heavenly bound lost, voiceless, no understandable sound, finds temptress, sexy wares designed to win she that siren alluring to all men. You scratch that itch, risking your own peril, finding wounds that can never be sterile! 12-15- 2016 For Daniel Turner's , What Was I Thinking, Contest 15 December 2016 Last verse inspiration, from his poem "Between the Lines Couplet sonnet Rhyme Scheme: a a – b b – c c – d d – e e – f f – g g 10 syllables each line.

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Date: 1/5/2017 8:47:00 AM
The sonnet is a difficult subject to successfully undertake; I would have to say you have made a pretty good fist of it, Robert - Well done! My very best regards as always. :) john
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Date: 12/23/2016 2:42:00 PM
Excellent poem, Robert. The imagery and message are both outstanding and relevant. Good advice, don't scratch that itch. Love this poem. A 7 for sure. Love and peace to you.
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Date: 12/20/2016 2:48:00 PM
The stings of temptation are described with great poetic flair.... ...Congratulations on your win
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Date: 12/20/2016 12:49:00 PM
WOW, Robert, that tells a story of one who falls very easily to temptation, some things we can't resist, the eye is eviler than the heart... Love it, and glad to be back. LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2016 12:23:00 PM
great sonnet I can see its a fave form read it out loud worked great for me well done stephen
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Date: 12/20/2016 11:02:00 AM
YOur poem is very creative, Robert. I think maybe the judge was looking for poems that were a bit surreal like his own. You did well to copy his style and I congratulate you for your awesome win!
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Date: 12/20/2016 9:37:00 AM
Wow, I love what you did with that line, Robert...a most creative warning for sure! Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra
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Date: 12/20/2016 9:11:00 AM
Congrats!!! Robert...superbly done my friend...a twitch for the itch lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 12/20/2016 3:54:00 AM
Dear Lord now you are making ME itch :-) Congratulations though, for a beautifully written piece.
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Date: 12/19/2016 10:53:00 PM
Very imaginative, Robert--a 7 for sure! I tried this one--couldn't move with it. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 12/19/2016 8:16:00 PM
Very good, Robert, I love the way you used the descriptive words to make a point. Congratulations on your win... :) . Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/19/2016 6:58:00 PM
Robert, so well done! : ) And so tough not to scratch that itch....
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Date: 12/19/2016 6:11:00 PM
Excellent, excellent my friend! You took his line and ran with it Robert! Congratulations on this winning poem...one of my faves of the bunch! 7 ; )
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Date: 12/19/2016 6:00:00 PM
Congratulations Robert on your placement in my contest. i love where your muse went with the silly topic. A well written sonnet. Thank you for your participation.
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Date: 12/16/2016 7:38:00 PM
I love this one, Robert! Reads like a winner to me! Good luck my friend!
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Date: 12/16/2016 6:24:00 PM
Hi Robert, I really enjoyed your take on the contest theme. Good rhymes and content. This packed a powerful punch. The point that you're making is clear. "Temptation " doesn't not discriminate. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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