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Temptation

Temptation Here I lay awaiting my faith. Can I tempt you with my ever lasting beauty that you can only see. Can I tempt you with my soft full lips against your lips. Let me tempt you with my breath blowing on the nape of your neck. Are you tempted to let me run my finger tips across your skin to follow every curve. Are you tempted to keep watching me lay here on the burning sand as the waves crash against my soft silky skin. Are you willing to fall for the temptation of passion... Written by Gina montalbo 04-11-2014 Note: I did on a request of another writer

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Twanna Irisha

Date: 1/23/2015 2:01:00 PM

Very nice.

Vera Prince

Date: 5/1/2014 7:17:00 PM

Very nice Gina

Gina Montalbo
Date: 5/3/2014 11:45:00 AM

Thank you.... Gina

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 4/29/2014 6:54:00 PM

Great write Gina :) Ana

Gina Montalbo
Date: 4/30/2014 11:27:00 AM

Thank you for stoping by and for your kind words

Robin Davis

Date: 4/27/2014 12:25:00 PM

Gina Such a passionate, sexy and loving write. Full of seduction and feeling. thank you for the nice comment on my Black Hole poem.

Gina Montalbo
Date: 4/28/2014 12:40:00 AM

No thank you... And your welcome... Gina

Jan Allison

Date: 4/23/2014 5:06:00 PM

What a beautiful sultry write. Hugs Jan

Gina Montalbo
Date: 4/23/2014 9:13:00 PM

Thank you for your comment .... Smiles and hugs..... Gina

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 4/22/2014 2:29:00 PM

Great write Gina.... hot.... love it!

Gina Montalbo
Date: 4/22/2014 5:16:00 PM

thank you Keith... I try....

Paul Callus

Date: 4/20/2014 9:40:00 AM

Hi Gina! Do you need to ask? :) Tempt as much as you like.....but pls do not just tease :):) Immensely enjoyed :) // paul

Gina Montalbo
Date: 4/22/2014 11:53:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words... Smiles and hugs.... Gina

Jeremy Street

Date: 4/12/2014 9:09:00 PM

Just A Note: Reading Your Reply Below, Dear Gina...Surely We Can Understand Such As These Things But, Follow Your Heart Keep Brushing And, Thank You, For Your Kind Visit....Love, Jeremy

Gina Montalbo
Date: 4/12/2014 10:25:00 PM

No thank you for your visit.... Gina

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/12/2014 6:55:00 PM

Very very tempting indeed!!! What a sexy beautiful poem!!

Gina Montalbo
Date: 4/12/2014 8:31:00 PM

Wow thank you.... Gina

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/12/2014 5:59:00 PM

Very sexy piece. line 5 add a t to temp. Did you make this the shape of a bell on purpose? If so I hope he was able to ring your bell. There is a playful quality in your writing. Well done.

Gina Montalbo
Date: 4/12/2014 8:30:00 PM

Thank you very much .... Gina

V P Mahur

Date: 4/12/2014 4:06:00 PM

Dear Gina, Nicely written and portrayed. VP

Gina Montalbo
Date: 4/12/2014 4:24:00 PM

Thank you for your insight... Gina

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/12/2014 3:29:00 PM

What a poem about temptation. It reminds me of the Mona Lisa that smiled just to tempt a Lover.. Good work keep it up... Lucilla

Gina Montalbo
Date: 4/12/2014 3:35:00 PM

wow! thank you..... Gina

Larry Berdoo

Date: 4/12/2014 2:53:00 PM

Gina,very creative and innocent. Thank you for sharring.

Gina Montalbo
Date: 4/12/2014 3:37:00 PM

thank you for your insight innocence is in the hands that see all..... Gina

Jeremy Street

Date: 4/12/2014 12:28:00 PM

Hey Gina, What's Up Girl ? Dig Your Beauty's Poe Love, The Passion...Yes, Even If We Were As To Descend Unto Their Deepest Depths In Carnal; Chasing His Flickering Tongue Ever Taunting Time ? Tracing, Her Silky Spine Sweet Sublime Poetic Crimes Podium Chimes....Still, We'd Fly As Rise To The Starry Skies *:*(* Love, Jeremy

Gina Montalbo
Date: 4/12/2014 3:48:00 PM

thank you it was a challenge for me to write outside my comfort zone....