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Tempest Of Pain

In the mists that swirl and speak your name
I'm quickly falling under.
This depth of my love's burning flame
just sends my soul asunder.

When daylight fails and I am lost
it's your dark heart I find.
If you could only feel the cost;
if you could read my mind.

You'd know the damage you have done;
the tempest of my pain.
With battles lost,no victory's won,
no pleasure left to gain.

Now you'll be on your merry way;
we never more shall meet.
The way I feel mere words can't say
as I cringe in defeat.

won 1st place in the contest "Write Me A Lightfoot Poem "
date won  5/12/2012

Copyright © Deb Wilson

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  1. Date: 3/27/2014 11:32:00 AM
    Hi Deb, Congratulations, on your own favorite poem. Stay Xool *xox* Forever LINDA

  1. Date: 3/22/2014 3:58:00 PM
    aha, I remember that LIghtfoot contest. How cool to see this one became your best of 2012, and congrats on having it honored again.

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 7:37:00 PM
    congratulations on your poem and win. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 4:05:00 PM
    Such an intense aftertaste of a lost love. Very well done, Deb! Congratulation on your win. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 3:18:00 PM
    The pain of lost love...and at what cost! enjoyable read. congrats on win. // paul

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 12:26:00 PM
    Hi Deb Expressive and moving. Down but never unde . All the best Theresa xx

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 11:51:00 AM
    languid expressions, deb.. sweet congrats!,, huggs

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 6:53:00 AM
    It was a great pleasure to read one of your best and favorite poem. Congrats on the win, deb

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 7:00:00 AM
    Deb....very deep emotion...congratulations on your win. Donna

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 11:12:00 AM
    Deeply sad... but well written. Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 9:00:00 AM
    Congrats, Deb. Well done. Happy Easter. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 1:24:00 AM
    Wonderful poem Flows so well even with such sadness. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 11:05:00 PM
    Deb, Congratulations with your awesome poem in my "Broken Heart" contest. it's a tough and painful life when love is broken. Goodnight~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 2:58:00 PM
    great portrait of emotional depth thanks for sharing

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 6:00:00 AM
    This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 11:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win with this fine write Deb.. Sorry to hear you are having a difficult time at the moment.. It is also great to see you back at the Soup :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 10:53:00 AM
    thanks for entering Deb and congrats on your first place win in the contest

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 8:37:00 AM
    A wonderful flow of feelings in this write dear poet ! And I see that congratulations are in order Deb...(((((claps))))) ! Well done my friend ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 6:58:00 AM
    Yes! I too say congratulations on a fine poem and in your winning this contest.

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 11:37:00 PM
    Congrtas on your win with this beautiful poem.Nice to see a poem from you after some time.I wrote on the same song for this contest.It failed :(