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Tempest

Tempest A tempest rages darkly in my soul Grief invades and disquiets solitude The theories that I held once, now are crushed Beneath the weight of loss and emptiness These beliefs which allowed naiveté To entertain ideals of joy throughout Each storm that life can toss my way…. Well, no longer do I have such hope; no more Deeply felt are hurts that lingered back Among the fringes of distraction's ruse, where I provided shelter for each trace of morose thought But now that cover has been blown aloft Wicked wind has buckled rigid walls That so carefully constructed by me stood By one great gust the sheen was stripped away From pools of sorrow just beneath the skin Now, ugly do they lie; these open wounds They threaten to anile all peace and calm For here, released from bonds of safe restraint, The tempest rages free and thunders on ©Donna Golden June 19, 2005

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Date: 11/7/2009 7:26:00 AM
True wisdom on display here, Donna....ugly turned to beautiful through words....that's what it's all about!! - Tim.... Post Script: Ring-a-dingy-ding-dong! (Here I go AGAIN!)
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Date: 5/3/2009 2:10:00 PM
Donna, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/10/2009 5:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Donna. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2009 2:05:00 AM
Congrats on your success in the PS contest.Best wishes for the next round Donna.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/4/2009 12:11:00 PM
... and this too shall pass ... smile ... and the sun will shine again! Very thought provoking writing here Donna, and a well-deserved selection to be a winner in Michael's contest. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/3/2009 6:18:00 PM
Donna your emotion linger in my mind Congratulations on your win in the contest! Laura :)
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Date: 2/3/2009 5:51:00 AM
Warmest congrats Donna on your win in Michael's contest! Quite emotional and intense. Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/3/2009 12:22:00 AM
Congrats on your success with this poem Donna.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/1/2009 11:46:00 AM
A great poem....I find myself writing alot about emotional aftermath. I like that yours comes out as a strengthened, even if maligned "tempest" rather than a softened victim....Beautiful
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Date: 12/30/2008 5:53:00 PM
Powerful write here, Donna. I hope you will enter it into Michael's "Soul" contest ... it is surely a winner!! This is an excellent selection to be a feature this week here at the Soup!! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/29/2008 6:26:00 PM
Amazing write Donna, I can relate to feelings like this. The emotion came through and your imagery was excellent. Congrats on getting featured this week! :) God bless, Amy
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Date: 12/29/2008 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Warmest wishes for a safe and happy new year! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/29/2008 8:56:00 AM
Donna - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – I hope the coming year has many blessings in store for you and those you love – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/28/2008 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations Donna on "Tempest" being featured. Life is an ongoing battle. Never, never, never quit. God Bless. Vince
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