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Telling God

Tell me - Telling God Mysterious indeed are His ways, He creates all life to run smooth and then sways, We, the puppets keep dancing at His will, Though pretend having gained an immense skill, Shaping the whole world in full grace, Of the Unseen, who can create His face ? Try finding Him in every life, By our side He's in each joy and strife, Else why do the busy day's end, Nights to quieten in peace He sends, In no religion and places is He found, Lives inside every kind heart that beats around, Faith is God, belief is God, love is God, Cheating yet preaching are all fraud, Apart from all colours, cast and creed, He is the one to be consciously perceived ! Inspired by poem "Tell me" by Richard Lamaoureux Written March 31st, 2015 For contest "Tell me" by Richard Awarded 3rd place win

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Date: 4/26/2015 9:32:00 AM
Hi Upma, please know that being at the bottom of the list does not reflect my placement for your poem. The computer decides the order. I enjoyed the sensitivity of this lovely write.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/6/2015 7:01:00 AM
Thnx a lot Richard! Placement in ur contest means a lot to me, I don't ever worry about ranking !
Date: 4/25/2015 11:09:00 PM
Hello Dr Upma, Congratulations on your awesome win in Richard Lamoureux's "Tell Me" contest. Have a nice day. LINDA
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Date: 4/24/2015 11:36:00 AM
Like I always say, take the religion out of the equation, and you'll perceive God. I agree with your view point.
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Date: 4/23/2015 10:20:00 AM
clear expression of your faith in God with rhyme to boot. Like Him there is no other. Beyond human comprehension, the Christ came to make God known to us. Congratulations, Dr. Upma
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Date: 4/2/2015 4:36:00 AM
it is great to discover people who are more wiser than it can be defined by words,,,nice write ,,i have written one same __God is No where,,,pls find time to read some of mine and i just wish if i can get to learn something new..#repsct..@burningsoulz
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Date: 4/1/2015 8:22:00 AM
Such an inspiring poem and so full of truths and wisdom, Dr. Upma. I love they way you created your lovely "Tell Me" poem. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/1/2015 8:16:00 AM
Beautiful prose, Dr. Upma: It always boils down to faith in God.
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