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Tell Me the Mistake

You screamed aloud and you left Was it really me to be blamed? Lost in mind, lost in thought Wandered everywhere to figure out No more brighter day no more beautiful morning That unbearable was I to be left hanging? Well there’s no, nothing to be regret You and I have immense memories that can’t be erased Take me out of impenetrable riddle Tell me the mistake that I didn’t commit?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/28/2016 8:30:00 AM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN
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Date: 1/7/2016 1:21:00 AM
:) SKAT
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Date: 9/4/2015 7:09:00 PM
Malvis, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/4/2015 5:46:00 PM
Malvis, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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