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Tell Me of Love

Think long and hard and tell me-what is love? I’m thinking of the normal answers, and they appall me! Tell me love is chocolate, flowers, and sex;make my day! I pity those who believe that, because that is not love No that is materialism, that is society ruining something special Love, well it’s different for everyone-depends on the person But I’ve got an idea of what it is to me… Catch this I get stationed in Korea, and I get on a plane I get off the plane and a woman I’ve never met has bought me a ring She confesses to me that she can’t live without me; I gave her nothing Well, not exactly nothing-I suppose I gave her happiness, made her feel special, I gave her hope She sent me the ring, and after only two months of talking, we are on the way to getting married Foolish, young, naive-blah blah, everyone has an opinion-no one keeps it to themselves They tell us slow down, get to know each other, spend some time together… Yet, we’ve planned for our first two kids already We’ve planned a savings plan to buy a house when my contract expires We are some of the most pro active you adults you’ll ever meet! But we are not in love right? Because I can’t kiss her yet, or hug her-I can’t love her? Let me ask you-when a mother is pregnant, does she love that unborn baby? The answer is yes…so why can’t we be in love? The answer is simple-society says it’s a recipe for disaster- Well, society, I hate to tell you this, I love her… Love is the feeling in your heart, knowing your appreciated… Love is being able to tell someone anything and everything… Love is giving up sleep, and dealing with it to see her face… Love is my blonde haired blue eyed fiancé… Whether society accepts it because “love” must be this physical thing Or they look down on it because it’s hopeless Nothing stops me from waking up when the sunrises here… And the sunsets where she is… …and I say those 3 words, with every bone, muscle, tissue in my body quivering in joy… …nothing has or will ever stop me from saying I love you to her I know what love is, and it's a beautiful feeling Love is simple… …love… Love is what you make it.

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Date: 3/19/2019 9:54:00 AM
Hi! It was fun reading your poem. To me love is creative. Love is pure. Love is blissful. If your love isn't right though then it must be wrong. Love
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Date: 3/19/2019 4:56:00 AM
yes; and love, Love is what you make it// great poetic expression
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Date: 3/8/2016 3:05:00 PM
Great! write Anthony, I love the line 'And the sunsets where she is…'...beautiful line!. Well done! for winning the free verse contest. Kim
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Date: 3/6/2016 2:32:00 PM
In my opinion you have amply demonstrated that love is ultimately a matter of choice. Yes, whether to choose to and then be of the ultimate chosen. Brenda
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Date: 3/6/2016 1:47:00 PM
Anthony: Love in the Bible is described 4 ways. Agape love, God's unconditional love for us. Phileo Love or brotherly love. Eros or erotic love which you mentioned and Storge love. That is the love between family members. I'll let you and any readers decide where your feelings fall for this young lady. :o) oldbuck
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Date: 3/6/2016 7:16:00 AM
!!! Sara
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Date: 3/6/2016 6:33:00 AM
Hello Anthony, Interesting poem. My wife and I have been married for 30 yrs. Man ups and downs but I still love her. Love is a choice. Thanks for sharing a good poem Oliver
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Date: 3/6/2016 5:44:00 AM
Beautiful poem on love read from you my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 3/6/2016 1:37:00 AM
Anthony, you seem to have a much firmer grasp of it than I did. We went steady for over a year before I got to RVN (1969), and she eventually sent me a "Dear John" just before she married another guy, so the hell with what "society" thinks. Very well thought out and expressed, John
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Date: 3/6/2016 1:21:00 AM
You ask me to tell you about love? Love is what it is... You said it all Tony in this great work. You the boss of Love....
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Date: 3/5/2016 10:29:00 PM
Eminently readable poem on love. My emotions on reading it several times prompt me to say: if I am a tree, love is its flowers....
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Date: 3/5/2016 8:52:00 PM
Love the passion, desire and commitment. Want to be updated on the continuing saga.
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Date: 2/27/2016 4:19:00 AM
Awesome verse, Anthony!!! ;-) Love's definition can never end.... Congrats for having your piece featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/16/2016 12:56:00 AM
Wonderful write Anthony.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 2/15/2016 10:33:00 PM
Hi Anthony, Congratulations on your win in the contest....VLAD.
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Date: 2/14/2016 9:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/14/2016 11:43:00 PM
www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/member_contest_winners.aspx You placed in 'The Best Free Verse Contest' :)
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Anthony Sfreddo
Date: 2/14/2016 11:30:00 PM
Thank you, but-wait? What did I win....what do I get for winning? Where can I see that I won?
Date: 2/14/2016 3:58:00 PM
Anthony, Congratulation on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "Its a lie" if you'd like. I hope you are enjoying your day. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/14/2016 12:02:00 AM
Anthony, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/13/2016 8:10:00 AM
I sure love this poem, Love truly is what we make of it, I love making the best of it. LINDA
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