Tell Him

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Please tell him, That I thank him For once in my life, Someone came to show he cares. Please tell him Everything was just a dream, And my love for him Is no longer the same. Please tell him, No more tears for him T'is last teardrop falls, Is my joy for the new beginning. Please tell him, Though he gave me pain, I still keep on loving him, From time to time, especially in my dreams. After going through Mending my broken heart, Everything will gonna be alright, Soon, I will finally survive. Please do tell him, When he made me believed, That his love for me is so intense, Was all just a crazy thing. For now, my feelings keep drifting, His memories linger in my heart, Oblivion just be on air, As I tear his souvenirs apart.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2013 5:44:00 PM

Leonora, I was so sure I'd seen all your poems and then I looked way back here and found THIS one. It's really nice and one of your best. Was there really a heartbreaker man like this one in your life?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/17/2012 9:00:00 PM

Leonora, i feel your emotions moving on within the words of this poem. I like what you did at the end... he deserves it, and you are the best... xox~pd

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2012 10:01:00 AM

I felt the need to stop by your list of poetry today Leonora. I wish to thank you for your kind words on my writing. Hope you have a wonderful weekend and hope to see you back here Monday. Love, Carol XX

Maxeen Dennis

Date: 8/6/2012 5:10:00 AM

I can relate to pain in a old relationship and mending my broken spirit. Enjoyed reading this, you give me hope of another lovng me. Great Job!

Len Gasun
Date: 8/9/2012 6:20:00 AM

Thanks Maxeen! Have a nice day!