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no time to snooze --------- some peace and quiet the morning news --------- good eats--no diet rush hour traffic --------- an awesome book ads pornographic --------- a shady brook media frenzy --------- a time to nap jealous envy --------- a purring cat solicitations --------- a mountain top wars of nations --------- the sound of Bach ------------------------------------------------------ time away from the everyday
________________________ Teeter-Totter Contest 8/12/14

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Date: 10/9/2014 11:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/9/2014 7:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem Carrie. I've never seen anything like this before.
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Date: 10/8/2014 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Carrie. Nice balances between stress and peace. Sandra
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Date: 10/8/2014 7:34:00 AM
Wow what a beauty Carrie! Perfectly balanced beauty, congrats on top place win!
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Date: 10/8/2014 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations on winning first place with this beautifully balanced poem.
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Date: 10/8/2014 3:44:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/8/2014 3:39:00 AM
Congrats, carrie, on this beautiful write
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:58:00 PM
Congratulations and I love this. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:01:00 PM
Congratulations, too on the win, sorry I forgot.
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Date: 10/7/2014 10:42:00 PM
Congrats Carrie with this beautiful piece....hugs Tim
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Date: 10/7/2014 10:29:00 PM
Carrie, very lovely poem, the rush versus relaxation with the vacation underneath is perfectly balanced. So sorry to get the results out so late, I was out of computer reach for quite a while. Thanks much for entering the contest.
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Date: 8/12/2014 7:45:00 PM
Carrie, this is great... I have been stumped on this one.
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Date: 8/12/2014 6:33:00 PM
oh this is fabulous - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx
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