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hanging out that’s what we do pondering glory and greatness, drinking nostalgia from a plastic cup that clock ticks, that song plays, cross our t’s and dot our i’s play fast and loose eagerly feel up life say we won’t look back, but do it when we think no one’s looking slip, swallow, sing, startle, emerge try our very hardest to be unique and close our eyes so tight that the blackness deepens around us make our bodies a smile, open, and begin again.

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Date: 3/10/2016 10:51:00 AM
awesome poem. Love LINDA
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Date: 6/3/2010 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Madison. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2010 7:58:00 AM
Congrats for your wonderful and sweet poem cheers suresh
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Date: 6/3/2010 5:16:00 AM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your pens flowing with passion. Wishing you all the best in the finals You are such a great writer… love Leke
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Date: 5/31/2010 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 4/29/2010 5:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured.
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Date: 4/27/2010 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Madison. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/27/2010 7:08:00 AM
You're either very old or very young. Anyhow, I like your style. Congrats on the write. Love, daver
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Date: 4/26/2010 10:52:00 AM
Many congratulations on having your poetry featured >> James
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