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Teenage Drama

Afraid to face reality That it might prove unpleasant Scared to be cheated And hurt by deception Hiding in seclusion In my own private world Plunging into a vast sea Of pleasurable memories Swimming with unfolding waves Of fiction and dreams Shying away from the Ambiguity of the present Living in a handsome yesterday For a beautiful tomorrow But when we’re left together And there’s just you and I I come out of my independent sea I extend my hand Hungry for the warmth of yours Craving for the soft caress Of your eyes and smiles And along sandy beaches We leisurely walk side by side The comfort of your closeness Has no need for words Till once again you must depart The sun falls The waves clash madly against The solid wall of rock below us You look behind I’m gone The outline of the cliff is bare All to be seen a silhouette Diving into a roaring sea AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted to contest EARLY DECEMBER STANDARD sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - December 1, 2017

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Date: 4/15/2018 11:32:00 AM
wow, a very impressive one going down your poems on that second page, Line. Brian never allows poems more than 20 or 24 lines. I think if it had been shorter, it could have been a winner. It is with me. I need to get hubbie off to work now. And do "my time" in church library at 12. HOping to have a bit of time before then to finish best poems on this page two!
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Date: 4/15/2018 11:43:00 AM
Thank you for your visit, Andrea. Much appreciated.
Date: 12/4/2017 9:35:00 PM
wow, the turbulence inside the teens mind, such a good way of describing this. a fav
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Date: 12/5/2017 2:03:00 PM
Thank you, Lewis. So glad it resonates with you. Much appreciated.
Date: 12/2/2017 5:48:00 AM
Such a dramatic ending to this tragic love poem, Line. Very convincing in it's full scope of understanding the underlying current of emotions can led to the sad farewell ending. You pen is a most capable translator of human frailty. Excellent poetry. Love and peace always.
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Date: 12/1/2017 10:53:00 PM
Wow! A frightening ending. Nicely done!
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Date: 12/1/2017 11:24:00 PM
Just teenage drama, Kim.
Date: 12/1/2017 10:00:00 AM
Lovely ... The ending is fascinating ...
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Date: 12/1/2017 6:17:00 PM
Thank you, Probir. It's all about the drama.

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